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Hestia, you're not human you know... you're some goddess. How can you update so fast? I think it's been 3 or 4 chapters in one day O.O And they are all sooooo good. Like I said you are definitely not human. Do you sleep at night? Saying I don't like fast updates would be a horrible lie and I'm sure everybody loves your rythm of updates but you should rest a bit if you feel like it :p.

Aww Sasuke and Naruto finally made up *joy* but Sasuke as a dom sounds wrong; he's much better as a sub. Even when he's supposed to be a sub Naruto still controls him hahaha. I can't wait for Sasuke to become Naruto's slave.

Oh XD, Oh XD :whispers a tiny squee: I'm so happy right now XD!! I Love you XD. Thank you so Much XD. I feel as if I let it out I'll bust and not come back. That was amazing XD. Sasuke at the beginning, so sweet and vulnerable, he though Naruto was fucking Itachi :huggles: And then LOL, Iruka and Kakashi cracked me up - when Iruka slapped Sasuke, and Naruto and Itachi fucking... No, just No XD. Kakashi and his lessons XD. But OMG the best was the fantasies, both of them, Sasuke telling Naruto what he did in his kitchen, so sexy - and they finally admitted that they love each other - I'm so happy right now, so happy I have to whisper and i can barely see, I'm grinning so much. Thank you, I love you <3 <3. Sasuke should so not be trying to Dom right now, unless his idea of Dom-ing is to ask Naruto to fuck him hard and good XD. Holy crap - Naruto stripping - How adore the cocky little shits, that was way sexy ;D. I adore you. Thank you. Are they really banned from the club mistress? Forever? That would be sad, but I could live with it, so long as they're together XD. Naruto's so topping from the bottom right now. OMG the Vodka bottle, that fantasy of Naruto's so indepth - I love it. He's so giving Sasuke ideas right now. And that ending, so sweet, so loving. To have that kind of devotion <3. That's the best fantasy ever. I adore you my mistress, Thank you so much :).

hoooooolllllyyyyyyyyy shiiiiiiiit. yes yes yes. they're talking again. and naruto's the sub. but damn, what an interesting sub he makes. he gets away with a lot! he definitely tops from the bottom, doesn't he? sasuke doesn't even have a chance i don't think. and that whole scene with kakashi was hilarious. i bet iruka's gonna beat him pretty good tonight for that one, yikes. and that whole beginning where sasuke was telling naruto whose cum it was... O.o holy crap. i can only imagine how turned on that made naruto.

aww but they got banned from the club after everything? what happens then? do they go to another club? oh well. that was so good to read again. i like when they're happy and stop being stupid and realize that they need each other desperately. thank you thank you for updating with those last three chapters. i'd missed naru and sasu so much >.< i'm so sad they're banned though because a show on the stage woulda been hot. but i can't wait to see what more sasuke has in store for naruto and if he can get him to submit. naru just seems impossible to tame. which is hot.

yes and ibiki was so cool. i love how he just sat there and drifted into thoughts of hand to hand combat. what a cool guy.

I knew Sasuke never stood a chance Mistress, but you are making him suffer so beautifully. And Kakashi being naughty (perverted) on purpose? Priceless.

OMG!!! That was wonderful. Slave Itachi... very hot!!!! And Kisame sending him to buy a cockring at Naruto's was genial.
I really love reading this. It's so intense!!! Hope to read more soon.

You slay me!

**dies**

Chapter 40 was very very sad but the last paragraph when Itachi returns was very very sweet. It's amazing how you can evoke so many different emotions within just one chapter. Thank you for writing.

*silent tears*

OH.MY.FUCKING.GOD... I dont know how to explain that...That was crazy. Simply put. Its gunna take me a little while to recover for that one...Please, please, please, put a little light in Itachi and Sasuke's lives!!

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