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by Hestia

person Anony Mouse
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A rabid plot bunny just attacked me and I just had to pass along this idea: what if Neji's uncle finds out about Sai, and attacks him in a jealous rage, rapes him, beats him, ties him up and brands his forhead! I'm so mean to Neji. Then Hinata and Anko could come in and rescue him maybe, or Sai could totally kick the b'Jesus out of him. or whatever.
person x_heina_x
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gawd, it was so hot!*_*
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*worships the ground you walk upon* You my dear are my fanfiction God from now on.. *throws rosepetals on the ground before you, so you never have to walk on the dirty soiled ground ever again*.

I've enjoyed this story so much, each time you update I let out a sigh of contentment, you turn me on, excite me and inspire me with you words, the style in which you write makes me gasp and yearn for more each time.

Thank you for making me your worshiping slave :D

And now update again *giggles*
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itachi. Kisame. Oh. My. Fucking. God. That. Was. Fucking. Incredible. That’s it... You’ve done it... I'm almost speechless... I’m totally floored... I don’t know what else to say...Oh. My. Fucking. God...

Cookie ~
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Mistress!!!!!

The ramifications, the consequenses, the... the... chaos.

Again you have managed to turn the world upside down.
person Inigeshi
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES MAN! WOOOO GO KiSAME! I think i i like sharkie a lot more now....
person zaccheo
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* sasuke, what an idiot. but itachi is owned by kisame now. and i hope that naruto would be able to clarify it all out in sasuke's stupid angst-ridden brain that its not what he think it is.
person llyoung
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The Kisame/Itachi chapter was very intense. Thanks for the update on their relationship.

In an earlier review someone mentioned that they would love a side story that would show Iruka and Kakashi's relationship from the beginning. I think this would also be a good idea if you inspiration goes that way.

Thanks again for writing and hope you continue for many many many more years.
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil Mistress, very, very, evil.

Making him buy the stuff back? Evil, pure and simple.
person Allys
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh!!! I could Cry!! The Good cry don't worry. OMG XD XD XD XD. You almost gave me a bloody heart attack when he started to walk away - Oh Goddess!! My heart could burst right now. And OMG the images. Itachi, so beautiful, Holy Crap, so very beautiful. You've filled up my heart, with that first chapter, and Oh GOD, the second... I'm so having to put in a call to fix this... predicament... that you've left me with. Hestia love that was single handedly the hottest fucking thing :swoons: This and chapter 6? the first NaruSasu session, are my all time favourites. Itachi is such a good accomplished little slave. And it's so odd, that he retains himself and thinks everything through like that. OMG and the incident with the trash bags... he and his brother, I believe the words were - That little Flirt!! They so know they're sexy and exactly how to work it XD. Damn... God to even Suggest having Naruto and Sasuke punish him... I need a drink, something to wet the desert you've made of my mouth. The agony and the ecstasy. I Adore YOU!!! This was ... no words... just Love, Thank you so very much kisses and worships at your feet. You make me smile so much, thank you for the lovely reply. I'm not at all creeped out, I'm actually deeply flattered. And LOL, no amount of coercion could pull me away. Again, I adore you. Your words touch me in a place that yearns for completion. You give me hope, thank you.