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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAH! Oh the irony...
The dom of the doms of the doms, collared and weeping.
Does that make Kisame, God?
I might as well add that I loved these 3 updates. Every word of them. Shikamaru's torture was pure beauty.
Ougon
*seductivly begs for more updates*
The dom of the doms of the doms, collared and weeping.
Does that make Kisame, God?
I might as well add that I loved these 3 updates. Every word of them. Shikamaru's torture was pure beauty.
Ougon
*seductivly begs for more updates*
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. Neji and Sai just... unlocked each other. Really, completely wonderful.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww i thought it was kisaita :(. i don't really like these two pairing, i mean kankshino and nejisai, simply because i don't really like these characters. but it's not my place to complain :). just.. kisaita was mentioned looong time ago and i'm really impatient to read it, i guess.
somebody wrote that he would like to see sasdei - aww, that could be interesting. i have never read any good fic featuring those two.
anyway, thanks to you once again for writing this wonderful story! :)
somebody wrote that he would like to see sasdei - aww, that could be interesting. i have never read any good fic featuring those two.
anyway, thanks to you once again for writing this wonderful story! :)
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah. Hinata passed out. Classic. I hope Sai paints the look on her face. Nice one.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By the gods mistress you have a gloriously twisted mind.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, that swing scene was wild! In fact, I’m whining at my computer, “I want sex like that!” But I’m getting ahead of myself in this review ~!
I’m waiting with bated breath for you to finish up Shino & Kankurou. I liked how you described Shino’s emotional loss of loosing his partner which twisted into a compulsion to express his suffering through physical pain, hence the body-building and tattooing. I liked his motivations for becoming a dom in the first place and now his need to become a sub, not without taking a major risk. But isn’t that what they are all doing when they become subs, taking a major psychological risk by giving up control to someone else in order to gain something else that seems missing.
Neji’s & Sai’s scene was once again, emotionally intense. Sai marveling at Neji’s “femininely embarrassing” house; more cathartic sessions, more dom/sub switching; Neji finding within himself to rise above his own personal pain to reach out to Sai; all the abuse Sai submits to as if he was actually going through a slow death, just waiting for that one bad sub session that might take him for good because he can find no real joy for living. And then to top it all off with that wild swing sex and Hinata’s hilarious reaction! I can’t blame her; if it was me, I would have outright screamed if not passed out from excitement. Who knows? Maybe she could get Anko to ask Neji if they could come over and “borrow” his swing sometime!
Cookie ~
I’m waiting with bated breath for you to finish up Shino & Kankurou. I liked how you described Shino’s emotional loss of loosing his partner which twisted into a compulsion to express his suffering through physical pain, hence the body-building and tattooing. I liked his motivations for becoming a dom in the first place and now his need to become a sub, not without taking a major risk. But isn’t that what they are all doing when they become subs, taking a major psychological risk by giving up control to someone else in order to gain something else that seems missing.
Neji’s & Sai’s scene was once again, emotionally intense. Sai marveling at Neji’s “femininely embarrassing” house; more cathartic sessions, more dom/sub switching; Neji finding within himself to rise above his own personal pain to reach out to Sai; all the abuse Sai submits to as if he was actually going through a slow death, just waiting for that one bad sub session that might take him for good because he can find no real joy for living. And then to top it all off with that wild swing sex and Hinata’s hilarious reaction! I can’t blame her; if it was me, I would have outright screamed if not passed out from excitement. Who knows? Maybe she could get Anko to ask Neji if they could come over and “borrow” his swing sometime!
Cookie ~
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay!
Just gotta say that I grovel at your writing skills!! You have written the D/s story that I have been waiting for. I really wanted to find a story that was very hardcore D/s and I really didn't want to write it myself. So thank you writing it first!!!
Secondly, I am kinda confused with Sai/Neji/Sai. Who is the Master? I am confused when Sai is fucking Neji on the swing Neji screams out Master to Sai, but I know that Neji is the dominate one.....I think. I was also confused with the beatings that Neji gave Sai and the slap that Sai gave Neji. I guess it is not a very defined relationship......
But other than that I am totally in love with your stories!!! Once again you come up with something wonderful that I want to share with the world....if only the world like Hard core D/s Yaoi with Naruto characters!!
Oh well You still have your loyal fan basic here at adultfanfiction!!!
Just gotta say that I grovel at your writing skills!! You have written the D/s story that I have been waiting for. I really wanted to find a story that was very hardcore D/s and I really didn't want to write it myself. So thank you writing it first!!!
Secondly, I am kinda confused with Sai/Neji/Sai. Who is the Master? I am confused when Sai is fucking Neji on the swing Neji screams out Master to Sai, but I know that Neji is the dominate one.....I think. I was also confused with the beatings that Neji gave Sai and the slap that Sai gave Neji. I guess it is not a very defined relationship......
But other than that I am totally in love with your stories!!! Once again you come up with something wonderful that I want to share with the world....if only the world like Hard core D/s Yaoi with Naruto characters!!
Oh well You still have your loyal fan basic here at adultfanfiction!!!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm loving this story! Please keep up the good work!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo!! review # 400 ::throws confetti:: the sai/neji works better than i had expected and frankly this is the best sai i've ever read in fanficdom. he's still sai but he has so much more depth to him too. now that you mention it, i am vaguely reminded of "a virgin kiss" (also something i loved reading btw ;-) but i think this neji captures different dimensions, like overcoming his past. and i'm still looking forward to some kank/shino action. make it sooooonnnn. :-D
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like to warn you that this is one of those rambling reviews when I talk about lots of random shit XD. LOL, sometimes you just seem to make my brain work overtime. It's never just smut with you :), it's always involving and provokes deep introspection, so... it's your fault really. Yeah, yeah I'm blaming you XD, it's all your fault - That's my story and I'm sticking to it XD.
Holy shit Lady. That has got to be the most complicated relationship ever. So very intricate, I could only just grasp the edges. It defies explanation, I am sort of blown away here. I don't really know what to think. It's awesome, like a big mess of life and hardship. Like an installation I had planned but never got to put forward - LOL, I thought it was really funny what you said about Neji and his preferences on art (views on installations etc)- such a purist XD, he so would be. I wanted to make an installation where I took several of my portraits of women, posed as historical paintings, allowing the 'models' to deconstruct their images as they saw fit, only to have me reconstruct them with 'traditional women's arts' like embroidery and needlepoint, scrapbook making - things of the home that were considered craft like. It was a really odd complicated desire I had to rip apart the old preconceived images and roles for women in art and put them back together as something more our own. But I realised that while the idea in theory is wonderful, the finished product never really comes out exactly how I wanted it to. Long stories of failed thoughts O.o, not to mention that after I did the paintings my teachers all screamed at me not to let anyone destroy them XD, LOL. It was interesting XD. Neji and Sai's relationship made me remember that for several reasons. How they both seem so broken or torn, like shreds of people, trying to hold each other together and getting thoroughly mixed up in the process, but it seems like they'll make a lovely whole, some day. I love that, it's gorgeous, life could never be perfect, so we'll hold it together any way we can and make it beautiful. You just rock my world, why do I always end up thinking deep, philosophical thoughts when you write smut O.o??? You throw me, I don't know. It's definitely an experience though, something to look forward to.
Oooohhh, your place holder is evil! I read them back to front ;). Wow, that's lovely can't wait till it's finished XD. Makes me want to go swim in the meantime - you reminded me of a conversation i had with my brother a while ago (Today seems to be a day for reminiscing :) We were discussing why when you swim - you swim until everything burns and your muscles hate you, and then it's like you've exploded through something and everything gets so easy, and you feel like you could swim forever. Paul-o said that when you do anything physical, that your body knows what to do better than your mind. He said that, that point, that burst, is when you've exhausted yourself to the point where you stop thinking, and your mind stops warring with your body and just lets the body do what it knows to do. We were actually discussing training children to fight, which is one of his jobs, he said you work them until their mind stops, stops contradicting, stops being distracted etc... and then you train their body, so that in a situation when they're scared and the mind is in turmoil, the body reacts. Yes we talk about random shit most of the time. LOL, anyway I just felt the need to share that, do with it as you may. This is just me wallowing in the throws of adoration - Till next time - Ja :).
Holy shit Lady. That has got to be the most complicated relationship ever. So very intricate, I could only just grasp the edges. It defies explanation, I am sort of blown away here. I don't really know what to think. It's awesome, like a big mess of life and hardship. Like an installation I had planned but never got to put forward - LOL, I thought it was really funny what you said about Neji and his preferences on art (views on installations etc)- such a purist XD, he so would be. I wanted to make an installation where I took several of my portraits of women, posed as historical paintings, allowing the 'models' to deconstruct their images as they saw fit, only to have me reconstruct them with 'traditional women's arts' like embroidery and needlepoint, scrapbook making - things of the home that were considered craft like. It was a really odd complicated desire I had to rip apart the old preconceived images and roles for women in art and put them back together as something more our own. But I realised that while the idea in theory is wonderful, the finished product never really comes out exactly how I wanted it to. Long stories of failed thoughts O.o, not to mention that after I did the paintings my teachers all screamed at me not to let anyone destroy them XD, LOL. It was interesting XD. Neji and Sai's relationship made me remember that for several reasons. How they both seem so broken or torn, like shreds of people, trying to hold each other together and getting thoroughly mixed up in the process, but it seems like they'll make a lovely whole, some day. I love that, it's gorgeous, life could never be perfect, so we'll hold it together any way we can and make it beautiful. You just rock my world, why do I always end up thinking deep, philosophical thoughts when you write smut O.o??? You throw me, I don't know. It's definitely an experience though, something to look forward to.
Oooohhh, your place holder is evil! I read them back to front ;). Wow, that's lovely can't wait till it's finished XD. Makes me want to go swim in the meantime - you reminded me of a conversation i had with my brother a while ago (Today seems to be a day for reminiscing :) We were discussing why when you swim - you swim until everything burns and your muscles hate you, and then it's like you've exploded through something and everything gets so easy, and you feel like you could swim forever. Paul-o said that when you do anything physical, that your body knows what to do better than your mind. He said that, that point, that burst, is when you've exhausted yourself to the point where you stop thinking, and your mind stops warring with your body and just lets the body do what it knows to do. We were actually discussing training children to fight, which is one of his jobs, he said you work them until their mind stops, stops contradicting, stops being distracted etc... and then you train their body, so that in a situation when they're scared and the mind is in turmoil, the body reacts. Yes we talk about random shit most of the time. LOL, anyway I just felt the need to share that, do with it as you may. This is just me wallowing in the throws of adoration - Till next time - Ja :).