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Those were 2 very sweet chapters (even if one isn't finished yet). Oh yeah, they were also hot. Thanks for the update.

Okay...I'm a believer in the Neji/Sai/Neji, hot dang! I'm so totally in love with them right now! Hoping Naru/Sasu figure themselves out, totally cheering Kisame on, loffing the Gaara/Shika!! Anyway, I love this story, because, not only is it freaking hot, but it's got enough plot and emotion to make it really, really, REALLY addicting!! I like the characters and I love their stories, so, anyway, just to let you know I'm addicted to your story and SOOO looking forward to the next chapter (and crossing my fingers for more Neji/Sai/Neji, leik omg).

how very intriguing...

swing fuck... I like

Oh the smex! Chappie 36 was pretty great for Neji! Keep up (huhuhuh dumb joke, my immature side is liao) the good work.

Wow, talk about catharsis in that last chapter! I was a little disappointed though, Neji is hot and an atomic sex scene is in order! Hopefully when he opens up more (no pun intended) he and Sai can burn a hole in the rug, and bed, and wall, etc. etc. etc. Keep up the great work, I love this fanfic like a fat kid loves cake.

Boy, my head is seriously spinning between four doms (Kankurou & Shino) and Neji & Sai) deciding who was going to sub and the deteriorating relationship between Naruto and Sasuke. When Shino stated flat out that ‘I’m not a uke’, ‘I’m a dom’, ‘No Master’s degree’, ‘Can’t get a date’, and Kankurou came out with that ,‘So, I guess you’re going to make me work to get you to make any noise.’ I was hollering this is gonna be good! But when Shino jumped that iron gate (still handcuffed!) and Kankurou when right after him, and ended up in the pool, I was outright screaming, it was that funny!

But Neji and Sai switching was so different and so touching. I knew Neji was hurting, so his uncle raping him definitely would explain his need for control, but Sai’s story really got to me as well. First of all, I like how you slipped in Danzou’s character, hence Sai’s purpose for being at Uchiha’s. But the lack of any real feelings, how Sai totally shut himself down emotionally after the very sad death of his brother was pretty heavy. So I really liked how you played out their session as a way for both of them to start healing their inner wounds.

But for the life of me, I’m STILL trying to figure out who ended up dom and who ended up sub, cause there was a hell of lot of topping from the bottom and at times, just outright dominating and submitting and then switching in mid-session! Which I thought was pretty cool!

Poor Sasuke, he's so messed up that he doesn't know what a good thing he’s got with Naruto. But I found his worries to be convincing given that he feels so swallowed up around Itachi. But I am impressed with Naruto here. He still has that impulsiveness, but he’s not stupid. He can see what Itachi has in mind for Sasuke. My impression is that Naruto agreed to that contract as a way to confront Sasuke to make a conscious decision about their relationship. However, if Sasuke signs that contract, at least without any MAJOR changes, it really will be all over between him and Naruto – and Itachi wins. Of course I'm wondering what's Kisame gonna do; I know he's not just gonna sit by and let Itachi be completely in control (silly grin)!

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Squeee! OMG That was... Fuck therapy LMAO XD!! That was Amazing Hestia. I wasn't sure how you were going to get that to turn around, or even if you were going to do it this first time, but that... I would have never seen that coming in a thousand years. Holy crap and coming on command like that, fucking mind blowingly impossible XD, I love it. I love that he lost control adn that he drew a pic of him raping Neji. OMG, Lady my mind is like half way down the street. You just Blew me Away. I don't now why I'm still surprised by the fact that you can, probably because things hardly ever surprise me, but you... You... :Bows down low, kissing feet: hmmnn, seems like I've been in this position before ;D and always for you. I adore you. This was magnificent. And LOL, I'm sort of hoping that the 'Itachi' brothers wasn't a typo, cause it made my day XD. This was above and beyond - Smexcellence!!

OMG sai and neji were adorable together, and i have to say that never in a billion years have i even thought about that pairing, but you made it work so well. you even kept sai remarkably in character, which is a mysterious feat.

i love the switch on reluctant switch nature of their relationship, and sai, oh sai, i can see them in the future now, i can see them when i don't think i could have before. you /have/ to have sai drawing neji at some point, it has to be done OMG i am so in love now *dies*

Oh god, the Kank/Shino chapter had me laughing my ass off. That was brilliant. I'm so in love with this fic-- which is wierd becasue I am NOT (strictly speaking) into domination/submission. but you write it so well, and it's clear that there's a level of respect and affection... and it's just so damn HOT. I blame you for my newly formed pervy fixation. I can't WAIT to read more NaruSasu goodness-- Sasuke totally wants to be Naruto's sub. There's no way he'll let anyone else touch Naruto if he couldn't even handle Lee doing it. I hope he breaks down halfway through Naruto's sub session and begs for cock. Bwuhahaha. God, this story is addictive. Thanks for posting (PS I've spent the last 4 hours reading this...)

oh amn i love this chapter! i kinda figured hiashi raped him... and sai was so perfectly written! Ah! the bliss. off topic i read w/ music and at the end of this fic all the things i've doneby the killer came on the intro for that song was the perfect exit for the chapter! Double the experience! any way aside from my non coherient rambling i really enjoyed ted the chapter and can't wait for the next. when you first put up this story i was kind of upset b/c i was looking forward to the next chapter of torture then i started reading and forgot all about it.... well good job and i cant wait for the next chaper

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