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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, Hestia! This fic is fantastic! I've been unable to stop reading it for days now. I absolutely adore the Gaara/Shikamaru side story (I mean c'mon, two of my favorite characters going at it like bunnies? Yes please!), Sai/Neji was beautifully written, Kankurou/Shino is damn hot, and Naruto/Sasuke...*mind explodes* This is one of the sexiest fics I've ever read. I can't wait until it's updated again. Hopefully, you can add in a bit more Chouji, just because I love him. But, even if you don't: Please, write more soon!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the Sai/Neji/Sai chapter. I hope that the two of them find what they need from each other and that Sai never goes back to Danzo and Roots.
Thanks for the update.
Thanks for the update.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The SaixNeji arc is exquisite - I thought ShikaxGaara was good. I was so moved! My god, you're brilliant. I'm holding back my tears of sadness (from the abuse stories) and joy form the healing. BRAVO~!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee! Another great chapter! And Sai and Neji - another unconventional pairing. But it works! Sai's backstory is quite interesting... that, and the way he can control his cock. yum... You did it yet again! Neji: "Three lashes. Six lashes. Eighteen lashes." Awesome. ^_^
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that's an interesting chapter. I mean... wow...
Neji is dominating without actually being seme. Thats very rare to see. Its fits them too perfectly. Seme/sub Sai with a Uke/dom Neji. Sai is amazing in this. I wonder what he'll do next with Danzou and the Uchiha club and Neji... For some reason, I couldn't care less about Sasuke and Naruto at the moment. I beg you to write a companion fic of Sai/Neji.
Forgive the short review. My brain has exploded.
Ougon
Neji is dominating without actually being seme. Thats very rare to see. Its fits them too perfectly. Seme/sub Sai with a Uke/dom Neji. Sai is amazing in this. I wonder what he'll do next with Danzou and the Uchiha club and Neji... For some reason, I couldn't care less about Sasuke and Naruto at the moment. I beg you to write a companion fic of Sai/Neji.
Forgive the short review. My brain has exploded.
Ougon
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There is a beauty in the pain and tears of that last chapter with Sai and Neji. I really appreciated it and am I weird for saying that it's sweet? I like how both of them have these secret smiles at the end. That was so darling. I remember when I read the first few chapters, I really enjoyed the amazingly realistic portrayals that you gave of the D/s scene, but now I'm even more blown away because somehow you've coaxed a plot out of the character interactions, and not just any plot, a serious kick ass one. I really love what you've put together here. Kudos for your characterizations, kudos for your plot, and kudos for you're writing. I can see the scenes happening. I love it! I'll be watching for the new chapters!! I'm so glad that you kept going with this. *very very happy*
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe, your so awesome. Neji smiled and sai smiled and I'm feeling all mushy and happy for them. :D
Your story is amazingly diverse. I'm thoroughly impressed by it. I had a thought, that I wanted to share (the main reason for my reviewing), but it involves perminate scars and I wasn't sure if Naruto would allow it. My random though was that Sasuke could cut the whisker marks into Naruto's checks (if he doesn't already have them). Thought Naruto would love that sign of ownership even if it was from a sub.
No idea where the thought came from or if it's too oc. But just wanted to share it.
Loving your work. :D Keep up the excellent effort. :D
Your story is amazingly diverse. I'm thoroughly impressed by it. I had a thought, that I wanted to share (the main reason for my reviewing), but it involves perminate scars and I wasn't sure if Naruto would allow it. My random though was that Sasuke could cut the whisker marks into Naruto's checks (if he doesn't already have them). Thought Naruto would love that sign of ownership even if it was from a sub.
No idea where the thought came from or if it's too oc. But just wanted to share it.
Loving your work. :D Keep up the excellent effort. :D
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story! My favorite has to be NaruSasu and GaaShika parts (the latter being odd cause I've never even considered the pairing!). Phew that Saturday is going to be something ... If Naruto gets DP or really get involved with anyone but Sasuke, I can see Sasuke going mad, in which more trouble ensues. xD I really have no idea what's going to happen with all these pairs, even though you listed a basic synopsis. I suppose if I would request anything, it would be a small scene with Deidara and Sasori. They get mentioned a lot and seem to act different than the other couples, so I'd be interested to see what they're like behind doors. Just an idea though, I'm perfectly happy with all the couples already.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't get me wrong, I love, no ADORE this fic, but honestly, the readers don't need to know your agenda. I'm not flaming, just critisizing. Isn't the point of fanfiction to keep readers "on their toes", waiting for what comes next? Personally, your posting of this schedule of yours disappointed me a little, and was unnecessary.
Other than that, way to go. You go into incredible detail about...well, a lot of stuff. ^^; Keep up the good work!
Other than that, way to go. You go into incredible detail about...well, a lot of stuff. ^^; Keep up the good work!