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sooo hot! wow :))

Waiii!! KankyShino XD, I Love it. Oh God... There was no actual smut, but it was still so fucking Hott!! You amaze me all the time. Oh Lady... Lady, Lady, Lady, I pity the person that you decide to seduce, not because I think it would be bad thing, but because they don't stand a chance. OMG!! That was fucking A+++, the only F present was the capitalised one in Fuck!! XD I'm so happy, Thank you... Thank you soo much XD.

Oh God... are you trying to break my heart?? Is that your story?? Cause you're succeeding marvelously ;_; OMG, that was... Hestia... I'm gonna cry, dammit. I don't like you anymore... I'm lying I love you, I'm just... ;_; God I'm a sucker.
And I have to thank you, because I've been wanting this, an update on the NaruSasu situation that is, not exactly this, but it is very fitting.
Oh Godess, please don't leave this hanging for too long, I think I need to go to bed too, cause I'm gonna start the ugly cry in a minute, so I have to distract myself. I think the shittiest thing is that I've felt like that. Almost exactly like that. That downward, nonsensical, self-destructive spiral of self pity and low self-esteem. Been there, done that, have the hat, and harbour no desire to visit, ever again. You've just hit, Queen of angst Lady.

Holy bipolar drama queen, Sasuke. He is acting like such a flipping girl and now Naruto is sort of acting like... an asshole. Unless that's how Naruto acts because he's being attacked by Sasuke when Naruto doesn't give a flying fuck about Itachi. Naruto even said the minute after he met Sasuke it was all about Sasuke and Itachi couldn't even compare. Stupid Sasuke!!! Though who would have guessed just because Lee was sucking Naruto's dick he'd throw a hissy fit. But Sasuke was the damn to pretty much tell Naruto he'd only been doing it because Itachi did. Isn't that hypocrisy WTF?

Now I'm starting to wonder if Sasuke even deserves Naruto. Though damn you Naruto, you ARE acting like a WHORE. But I bet Naru's just pissed off because Sasuke's being a betch. I don't want them to share!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG *pulls out NaruSasu fangirl claws* WAAAH. wait, no, your story. I will read it forever. But the angst between these two is KILLING me. Why is everyone else getting along fine (Gaara/Shika; Itachi/Kisame; Iruka/Kakashi; so on and so forth) It hurts insiiiiiiiide!!!!!!!! And not in that good way. Oh for the love of God please tell me they will work it out on Saturday... if they don't then... I'd rather see them with other people or just gone because I can't taaaake it! Would Sasuke really have Itachi fuck Naruto? I just don't know! I guess I won't know until you write it, and I am SO excited about it... Allys, are you reading this??? You made me think someone died!!!! *retracts claws*

But seriously, Sasuke I hope can be one hell of a dom and find Naru's weakness cuz right now Naru just seems super tough.... I wonder what Sasuke will do to make Naru cry and whimper and beg and mean it. I bet Sasuke's smart enough to find it. Does Naruto even get jealous at all? It doesn't seem like it! Dammit Naru, how can you love Sasuke and not want him all to yourself...!!! *sigh* I'll just go reread the beginning when they sort of got along. thaaaaank you for updating so quickly. i would pay you to update i would, seriously. thank you for this story!!! *bows*

sorry! i wasn't able to review for some time.

awww, the narusasu lemon was the best :). and i actually think the smut did good to the plot, aside for readers' happiness. it contrasted well with what happened earlier, sasuke's perfect submission with the uchiha trademark attitude. and oh, i infinitely love you for including corset piercings ;).

i really really look forward to more scenes with itachi in the future. he is a complex character and every author portray him in some individual way, and the itachi you created appeals to me very much. he's mysterious, dominating and at the same time struggles with his desire to fuck his younger brother and is an endearing uke. it's actually good that you made kisame his seme - in most stories itachi's the ultimate dom, but i hardly view him so. at least not with his looks and height, gods, he's such good uke material :).

i don't really like to read scenes other than these featuring itachi, narusasu, irukaka or deidara, so i'm not commenting on them. they make my wait for another narusasu interaction sooo much longer :).

finally, i can't wait to read the kisaita lemon (will it happen?) and as everybody, i'm looking forward to saturday :)
kisses!

XD, YAY!! Thank you so much, LOL, that's a Lot more chapters - Happy dances! And Huggles you to death for going back to the Kanky/Shino scene XD!! Are they actually going to do the DP??!! The Uchiha's and Naruto O.O? I suppose if they all to terms they could swing it without too much fallout. Oh and XD, 36 with KisaIta, are we having the whole watching the toilet scene smut? XD, I'm so freaking happy XD, not to mention that you said next Sunday Naruto pierces Sasuke's cock :D, I'm just gonna take that as a sign that everything'll be okay XD. Glomps you for writing this.

I've been reading your story for a while now, but never commented before...I just wanted to get caught up before I did. I really love you story and I'm hooked on it. I'm always checking for your updates before anyone else! hehe Its really a work of art, and I love Naruto's job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ok.. you've done it... you've got me drooling over the future chapters.. *glares* Ok so now you have to be a good girl and write till you drop cause I want more smexy d/s goodness so i can sit here and fan myself and drool at all the sexy mental images you keep sending my way (and the other readers of course), I can't wait for the Neji/Sai part I think you should make Sai the dom for sure, Neji needs to learn his place the guy is just too pretty to be a dom *grins* and omg I'm hooked on the Gaara/Shika parts, it's too sexy and more Kan/Shino please ;)

So flex those fingers, get comfy in your chair and write woman!

*blows kiss*

I've been meaning to comment for ages, but then you go and spoil us terribly with a new chapter and my articulate comments descend into 'whoa'. Drat you. Keep it up.

One thing I would -love- to see is a separate story in which we get to see how Iruka tamed Kakashi. How the two met, what Iruka had to do to win such amazing submission from his slave... Makes me melty just thinking of it. If you'd think about it...? I can offer an art bribe. I just think your description of them is so bloody marvelous, and your idea of Kakashi as a dojo master makes such perfect sense.

Actually, I've greatly enjoyed all your character descriptions, and -adore- your pairing of Shikamaru and Gaara. They come across so fantastically, both in a character driven as well as a visual sense. (My, my, Neji will keel over from fury/envy when he sees the two interact in public.)

I think my only whinge about this fantastic fic is that give one the impression that anyone into D/s has to be gay as the First of May. A minor quibble, 'cause I liked the idea of Temari and her girls, Akamaru being a dogboy instead of a real dog, and all of your pairings.

Once again, thank you for the lovely writing, and intelligent take on a practice seldom mentioned in Naruto fan fic. Tho honestly, what with Sasuke and his wire work... *grin*

-d.

Glad to read that you have so many wonderful sounding chapters planned before the big Saturday night event. Looking forward to Gaara/Shika especially (we all have our favorites and along with Iruka/Kakashi they are mine). Thanks again for all the time and energy you spend on writing this story.