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I read the whole thing in one sitting! it was hot! damn hot!

I love this story!!! Mostly the Naru/Sasu chapters! You're a fricking genius...

Keep going!!!

I want Kanky too...

I enjoyed the Kankuro and Shino chapter very much. I do worry about what Naruto will let be done to him and poor Sasuke is just confused and hurting.

Thanks for the two new chapters. And I will keep checking for new updates. I still find it amazing that you can keep updating so quickly and keep the quality so high. Thank you.

im running out of ways to say how much i adore this story, but i hope it means all the same no matter how trite the phrase becomes. ^^ i'm pretty much speechless after each update too. i don't know what to say really, nothing you don't already know, nor have heard as well. everything's peachy keen, going good, and i love it, period. you're setting the bar up pretty high, and i hope kanky and shino's relationship gets just as much substance as naruto/sasuke's and gaara/shino's. :-) but honestly i want to thank you for sharing this story here, for a college student as myself with finals are a-coming, just checking up on AFF and finding your story updated is helping me keep what's left of my sanity. i look forward to seeing TONS more updates. ^^

More great chapters! A question for you: is Itachi's club for men only? Or for gays only? Will we ever see Anko and Hinata there or even some het couple? Either way, you rock!

On the Newer chpt 29 - LOL, so you just decided to go back and spice that shit up XD From Sweet to Hawt! in like 9 sentences, XD. You are something else - I am so hearting right now XD.

On chpt 31 - LOL, I thought that about the sand too, but I didn't want to spoil anybody's fantasy's of sex on the beach XD. This was the sweetest, nastiest, kinkiest fucking thing XD. LOL, I love that they were watching Bleach, yum - Renji, LOL. Demerol and beer, cute drunk Shika XD. I totally agree about the facial tatt's though, Gaara's is hotter, although, Renji's go all down his back, so lickable. But, the BEST, was the list. Gaara is so adorable, you write him so well - a big gauche, yet graceful ball of unrestrained violence mixed with naieve sweetness :D. LOL, and I love that Shika's fucking Kinky as all shit XD, LOL. MMmmmnn, my face hurts from grinning to hard at one o'clock in the morning. Thank you, again, Luffles you.

Gaara's monologue, chapter 31. Perfect.

OMG! I love this story...

Its taken me 4 hours and I havn't looked away once, and usually I hate BDSM stories but this is fucking AMAZING!

Your characters are just so life-like and I love how you've taken little cannon details and twisted them to suit the story... Like Sai and Danzou's club Roots. When I read that I think my eyes fell out of my head.

I humbly ask for more *begs*

Ougon

gods that was an adorable chapter, with poor poor Gaara finally being all at peace. i always pictured Gaara having some moment like that in the series, and this just brough up all of those beautiful pictures in my head, it was just utterly perfect and i loved it. i like that you keep going from pairing to pairing, instead of just making it all about sasuke and naruto, because as much as i love sasu/naru, they're not the only hot people in the world, and having more pairings, and everybody interacting makes it feel so much more epic, fuller, so much more like a verse than just some short little piece.

p.s. loopy shika makes me giggle and squee
that is all

may your muses be kind and grant us more quickly