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Oh God... first off I have to say that with that ending, it makes the next chapter even more heart-breaking. Oh God ;_; poor Naruto. I really don't fucking blame him for just getting up and leaving. I mean I didn't before, but now... :sigh: and then Sasuke, begging: punish him, do whatever to him, just don't make him watch someone else serve his master ;_; that puts a whole new spin on the fight. Poor Sasuke, thinking: look what I did for you, I fucked a toilet brush for you, and not 15 mins after you leave me, you've got your cock down someone else's throat. I don't know what I'd do if I were either of them, but hey need to fix it soon, that's one of those things that will not benefit from having slept on it. You didn't seem as into the smut as you usually are, but it was still really Hott. I definitely enjoyed the beginning with Naruto showing his sadistic side - Don't shake? O.o Don't shiver? O.O Yeah I'd be failing that test, Horribly, LOL. Oh god and the dancing XD, I was torn between wanting to laugh and biting my lip and fanning, Damn... do we ever get to find out how Sasuke knows how to dance? I mean it could just be natural genius, but hmmn... I know what was missing - that in depth view you give that sinks me into the character so very far, that I forget myself. It came out to play when Sasuke was dancing for Naruto, again some parts of that were just mmmnn spectacular, and the lashes with the crop, and the descriptions of the ribbons moving. Hmmn, but I'm kinda sad that I didn't get to see the actual pleasuring you promised at the end, I missed the rush of overwhelming feelings. I also wish we could have seen at least a little bit of Sasuke's pov - I guess that's how I know I'm not cut out to be a Dom :smirks: I'd always be wondering what was happening on the other side. I missed being in subspace. That's the fantastic thing about your writing; just reading the words can bring me to within an inch of that place, where all I want to be is a good little girl and have someone to please. Do I need to tell you, I think you're awesome, or did you get that ;D, LOL. Don't let us pressure you, write what you want to write. Thank you so much for the update, it's always nice to know you care :D, Luv and huggles, Allys.

Thank you thank you thank you thank you for the new scene with the toilet brush. I feel like I don't even deserve to have this story be updated as much as it is. OMG I just about cried to see this chapter up! It was so good. Poor Sasuke, but it's just sooo damn hot. And Naruto is so good. Ah, I can't get enough of this story, damn it. And I'm STILL dying to see what Naruto is like as a sub. I can't even flipping take it!!!! I LOVE YOU. I can't control the level of fangirling. Thank you for the chapter, thank you for the story. It is THE BEST. MORE, please. Whenever you want, but don't stop!

ahaha omg... sasuke and man tit... great chapter of comic relief XD

can't wait for next Saturday!!!

Haha, that last chapter was so funny. Poor sasuke in such denial!

Oh my god, TRAINWRECK, and with half the people there just sitting and watching the floor show. *applause*

wow, that was the most random chapter by far. but still amusing. i like a jealous sasuke, but i'm kind of sad lee got that far with him. maybe if it was gaara flirting with naruto >.< then sasuke would be really pissed. sasuke is such a girl, i swear. but all the cracks about him giving lousy head are so great. and poor naruto comes to his defense. (no pun intended).

Naruto seemed different in this chapter though. Just his interaction with Itachi. I dunno. I'm not sure how I feel about Sasuke and Itachi sharing Naruto... I mean would Sasuke be okay with that since he obviously has issues with Naruto being with other people? I'm so confused! Naruto loves Sasuke, yes? But he's cool with fucking other people if Sasuke allows it? Or... prior to Sasuke barging in, he would be okay with fucking other people? But okay... then Sasuke probably has feelings for Naruto, he's just freaked out. So... would Sasuke get with someone else? I can't tell. But he doesn't want Naruto with anyone else... those two are messed up. But I just think they're good together. I don't know. I'm so biased anyway. I don't like them to share either! But what I think would be hot, if one was pissed and they did that to purposely get the other jealous (preferably Naruto with someone else)... but neither of them seem like they would do that to the other. So confused. Yet it was funny. I can't wait to see what Naruto's like as a sub. He seems like he'd do just about anything Sasuke wanted. I hope it's as hot as it was with Naru as a dom. No pressure. LOL.

yet another brilliant chapter!
keep up the good work!

This chapter was absolutly brilliant. You got the action and pace perfect and I found myself reconsidering it all day after reading it this morning. Excellent work. Can't wait to read the next update. :D

omfg... I couldn't stop laughing at the last chapter... That was wow... I had never seen that coming and when Sasuke came I was like 'Oh shit' and then all hell literally broke loose. I hope Naru-chan and Sasu-kun don't get band... Can't wait to see what your devilish little mind comes with next.