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that chapter was great! it was intense and really hilarious. i like it when sasuke's so short-tempered. many forget that under his non-emotional mask he's as passionate as naruto. the story's getting more and more interesting..

Thanks for the inserted chapter with Naruto and Sasuke's session. It was very hot. Looking forward to your next update (and hoping for some more Gaara and Shika soon).
Thanks again for writing.

I love you story btw! I don't know if I've reviewed before but I'm a big fan of bdsm, particularly the D/s portion of it. I love the way you write and being the grammar and spelling fanatic that I am, I'm happy to say you don't have many, dare I say none at all, typos or mis-spellings. My comment comes not about your story but your chapter naming. With all the inserted chapters that are coming before the newest chapter, it's a little hard to decipher which chapter is new because a different chapter has NEW next to it as well. I thought maybe you could change some of the chapter names so only one chapter at a time says NEW next to it, and it might clear it up a bit for those people who have been reading for a while. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Jen.

Hi there! I just stumbled over this fic and I must confess at first I didn't know if I shoul read it since up 'til now I haven't been interested in D/s-fics or any of the stuff. But after the first chapter I was already hooked. Okay, some of the more intense scenes are still something my poor little mind boggles at but the pure hottness alone makes up for that ^_^ Your fic leaves my aching in places I never thought would react to such scenarios. So thank you very much for this new experience -_~ Please continue ASAP (and maybe you can put a nice little dom session with Itach/Neji in there somewhere ^^)

i thought the new chapter was the skipped out narusasu lemon ;___; i'm going to cry now.

Thanks for another chapter. My favorite couple to read about is Gaara and Shika (it was Iruka and Kakashi until Gaara and Shika got together). I would really enjoy reading about their week off and hope you plan to write it. Thanks again for writing.

Very Nice XD, I'm loving Gaara's plans for Shika and that this story is like 10 stories all wrapped up into one. It's like a Soap Opera XD, I never did understand why those things were so addictive until now. But OMG, you made me feel real bad for Neji, although I always find it really hard to feel truly bad for Neji, cause he's such a prick XD, but I love him anyway. LOL, hopefully Sai can straighten him out... well not literally XD. I'd love to see what's gonna happen with them, the way you keep saying that Neji really shouldn't be a Dom, makes me wonder if he won't find himself in a sticky situation with some over-turned tables XD. Oh and Hello Temari - She is by Far, my Favourite girl in the Narutoverse XD. Love that woman, oh and are you gonna write that family dinner? Cause that could be really interesting. And LOL, Sakura and Ino showed up O.o, only to be dissed and sent on their way XD, LOL. Sorry, it's really bad of me but I very much enjoyed that, it's not even that hate them really all that much, it was just funny as all ass XD. OMG nad Kanky and Shino O.O That I'm actually uber excited about. I love Kankuro, and there are so few stories with him, and they usually have something to do with Kiba XD, I really like them though, Oh God and Kanky, Kiba, Shino threesome would be hott, LOL, but probably ultimately too random. And zomg, please don't leave me hanging too long with the NaruSasu dilemma that you dropped on us the other day, and then disappeared ;_; LOL, I aint mad at ya, I actually really happy about that, LOL, it was so in character, and I do love my drama, but I can't help but wonder what's going on in Naruto's head. I don't think he believed Sasuke, I mean, maybe for a second, but if he gave any thought to that at all, he would have had to realise, I mean - Come on. I wonder if he's really gonna leave him alone for that long? I mean Sasuke totally deserves to sit and pine, but Naruto doesn't, oh God, I just had a horrible image of Naruto turning up at Uchiha's with a new sub, or Dom O.o, that would be bad, and heart breaking. A new sub would be worse though. Grr, I'm not gonna think about that too much, but oh yeah Yamato taicho hasn't shown up, and LOL Konohamaru, but he may still be too young for this. Okay, I've rambling for a while now, time to wrap this up.

O.o, now that I really think about this, all this chapter did was make me want you to write more! XD, Way to reel us in Goddess lady set up all these little situations that have me squirming around and checking AFF like 10 times a day just to see if you've updated. Who knew you were such a tease ;D. LOL, Ja mata, update soon ne XD.

I was hope Sasuke would stay uke.
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I have been reading fanfiction for years, but i have to say that this one is one of the best i have read yet. You are creative, and well written. You have a lot of chapters, but you havnt filled them with useless information to make it that long. I find myself checking up on it for new chapters, which i normally do not do. I am even thinking of sending this to my husband, who is off on assignment. Please update regularly. i cant wait for the next chapter!

I was so happy to see an update!

Woo-hoo! How exciting! My goodness... the club will never be the same. So, Sasuke *had* to admit he cared, eh? ^_^

Stupid, stupid Aoba... I hate him, very much. It'a a little unnerving that Itachi is handling Naruto and Sasuke's contract. And Genma teasing... Yay!

You're so awesome. I'd like to gift you with boxes and boxes of sex, but as I don't see how that's actually possible, instead I'll just give you my love. Here it is: *love for you*