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Okay no, Fuck that, I take it back, Itachi knows exactly what he's doing, fucking smirking bastard, XD. He coulda done this shit in private, Nooo! Has to be stupid bout it, Fiiine... W-Hat-EVER!!! XD Naruto is the smex man, I really didn't expect him to come down and lay all his shit bare like that. Most people would be ashamed, God I love him, to be that secure, he doesn't know these freaking people, that's just fucking awesome man. And OMG - I love the wax play idea, always have, I was that idiot kid that would sit and run their fingers through the flame and dip them in the wax, when ever current went and we needed candles. LOL, I used to get yelled at a lot XD. LOL, and oh yeah, more highlights - Naruto’s passionate statement might have been more believable if at that moment his eyes hadn’t crossed, and he bent forward letting out an “ooofff.” Hehehehe XD. And ZOMG! Where the Hell did Sasuke come from!! XD LOL, Oh what a mess XD. I Love it XD. Speaking of Sasuke, slap a fucking wig on him and call him Lucy, cause he's got some splainin' to do. Naruto may need to borrow Iruka's cage, O.o Damn... Oooh oooh, Or the torture thing for bad slaves from Beauty!! "String him up Naru-chan!" LOL XD. OH God and the Bitch Slap LMAO!!!! XD O.o, Did Naruto fight that whole fight with his slong swinging XD, hehehehe, Man tits, LOL XD You're gonna kill me one of these days you know. LOL, I don't think that'll Ever get old XD. Thanks you so much my Goddess, you've made my day, yet again XD. :kisses feet:

Hoah! I had the laugh out loud at Chapter 28! Of course Itachi is going to be the “weasel” since he has an emotionally controlling interest in Sasuke, but this was definitely Naruto’s chapter. I loved the fight scene (Ooo~ knifeplay just sends chills up my spine!) and the way he took over and hauled Sasuke’s ass out of the club over his shoulder. Like a good dom should! But I also liked Sasuke’s jealous rage. He’s starting to sound more like Kakashi in that he is sub-material, but he’s not a whimpy sub and doesn’t take kindly to anyone touching what his master gives him (whether its nipple clamps or blow jobs). Next!

o m g!! you just keep getting better and better , i sooo can't wait to see what u write about when naruto subs like that hehe, i just luved how sasuke got jealous, oh yeah he's not in luv YEAH RIGHT!!! lol please update soon i want to see more sasu/naru/sasu baby yeah! lol

Nice, that was fucking beautiful. Your story's HOT. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

such anger, that was great cant wait to read the next ch.

I've gotta say that I loooove this story it's one of my all time faves already! The way you write and everyone's personalities are just perfect. Sasuke being so scared of being in love that he basically just rejected Naruto just about broke me heart! I know this might sound selfish but I REALLY hope this stays NaruSasu with Naruto in charge/dom-ing...there's just so few GOOD Naruto-as-seme fics out there. <3 Thanks so much for writing this and as always I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

aww that was sneaky of you! i was waiting for a great lemon, and there was angst.. mind you, it was well-written and nice to read. i can understand sasuke's fears, though i hope they'll be dispersed, maybe itachi could help?
ah, itachi. i really really hope you could write a double lemon - kisame taming his bitch with narusasu love in the background, hmm.. ah, the possibilities :). i think that could even be my favourite lemon ever :D!
anyway, thanks as always for your hard work!

ok..i just had a thought and i just wanted to share it with you. i don't know what you would think about this or how you would even fit it in your story, but the image of itachi being a dom to naruto and sasuke as subs, but then making his two subs fuck each other is like a freaking dream come true. haha. anyway, i just had to share that with you in case you ever feel like playing around with those three. damn it. i think i just made myself all tingly and excited. LOL

O god.. you almost made me cry with this last chapter, I could feel the hurt, the pain between Sasuke and Naruto so much, how they both fell in love with one another but Sasuke being too afraid to admit it and to protect himself hurts Naruto.. so well written and detailed, I love how Naruto damaged the bracelet so it couldn't be taken off, you really make me wonder where this all comes from, the stuff you write it's amazing and I'm normally not into D/S at all! but this story, I think i'm addicted to it rofl.

Well...I've started reading your story yesterday and now I'm totaly hooked to it. The way it's written is just... perfect. The way your characters think and act is amazing. I love reading this but I'm sure you have other things to do, like work and stuff, so I'll wait patiently for the next chapter and hope that Sasuke wakes up soon before he ends up losing Naruto.