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"It was time to tame his bitch."
nice ending *mischevious grin*

yessss!!!! ::does the cabbage patch:: Kankuro is in the house and bringin' sexy back!! o boo, i actually think him to be better looking. o well. i mean he's a bit stocky if anything. But he's an understated sexy and an overwelming pervert. ^^ and shino!! teehee. I like how my suggestions for neji's partner were in turn made into a couple themselves. haha! that rocks. i love your shino. i always wondered what he was packin' under that trench coat. arsenal? nope, just a smokin' bod and o man, I can picture him so well. he does look super mixed (of races). and that kisame, you go discipline that naughty naughty itachi! show him who's his daddy. ::rotten tomato smashes face:: okay i'll shut up now. but do update! and soon too! :-D

Chapter 26 - I don't know how you do it. You just keep writing chapter after chapter each one better than the last. Thank you.

NOOOOO!!! Fuck, fucking Sasuke, fucking emotionally baggaged Uchiha. If I were Naruto I'd be pissed as hell. Naruto knows exactly what Sasuke is doing. What a fucking dick. After all Naruto did for him... what the hell. Sasuke had been so into it and because Naruto was gonna say he loves him? If he was going to say that at all?

BULLSHIT.

omg. but thanks for the fast updates. i worship thee. i do. i keep rereading all the narusasu bits anyway, so it's like i'm just waiting for it to be updated anyway. thank you.

wow getting better and better, poor naru basically rejected by his perfect love :(, after reading that chapter all i can think about is naruto turning back to drugs, (seems like it would make sense that a past addict might turn back to that lifestyle after having his heart stomped on)and showing up at their fighting match with kakashi all doped up or something but hey can't wait for what you decide, luv ur writing style, and when u said something about how naruto looked like he was full of rage but sounded normal or when he spoke to sasuke like he was retarded, that reminds me of the anime naruto with his fake smiles, perfect for his character, and the kankuro and shino pairing, good choice :P, well no matter what happens can't wait to read more, especially sasu/naru/sasu goodness :P keep up the amazing work

i've been reading this and well most of the time i'm too speechless to leave a review. i still am, but i just had to tell you that i luvs ya for this story even though the angst hit me like a ton of bricks and now you have to take a break and now i can't blame your story for me not writing mine! i am so freaking excited to see naruto sub, with how he is as a dom it makes me tingly just thinking about it and nejisai makes my mouth water. okay, so i'll go calm down now and try to wait patiently and go back through the story and read my favorite parts and let my imagination soar.

I think it would be a good idea if another character shows interest in Naruto expecailly after having sasuke shurg him off like that. it might make sasuke jealous. Just an idea. ;) But no matter what you read it will most likely be very good. :D

OMG you are like the author of every good fangirls wetdreams. you just keep updating, and it always gets better. at first i was dissapointed when sasuke ruined great sex with his angst, but i mean, theres been lots and lots of great sex, especially with those to, and it was just so completly in charachter for him to do that, so i really can't complain. i do think my favorite thing in this chapter was there at the end, when naruto, possibly accidentally, but somehow i don't think so, damages that bracelet that little bit, just so that sasuke can't take it off. it's spiteful and gentle at the same time, and i wonder if he knows that sasuke will look at it and think only of him, because if he does he's way way ahead of where sasuke thinks he is in understanding the secret language of Uchihas, though i think thats also totally cannon as well. i feel like you're amazing at keeping the characters in character, even when things are happening that would never ever happen in the series (but a fangirl can dream, right? im starting to believe kishimoto has gone senile, or unlocked his true genius, but we'll see, ne?) and from the last chapter, i have to say i wouldn't anticipate /those/ pairings persay, but you do seem to be the number one author at surprising me, always in a pleasant way of course. i really do hope you write the scene with kisa taking itachi from behind while watching the tape of his brother, and i wonder how itachi would react to the conversation afterwards. does he know sasuke well enough to see through his BS, or will he believe it all, and would he approve of an end to the naru/sasu, because of all the changes that will bring about...

I admit, when I first started reading D/s, I was horrified at the utter chaos of the Master/Slave & Dominant/Submissive factor. However, now that I have read the whole thing, I congratulate you on the your wonderful writings.

I found it hard to see Iruka as a Dominant and Kakashi as a Submissive (as you usually see it in reverse) and Iruka's odd fetish with pain and anal abuse. It was also had for me, personally, to see Naruto as Dominant and Sasuke as Submissive, because I usually read that in reverse.

But I commend you on your story! It is wonderful and enjoyable to read. I hope that you will continue on D/s as well as you may start some other fiction!

Best wishes,

H.O.I.M.S.

Awh. Shika and Gaara... love. ^^