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Oh god, everytime I attempt another review, up pops another chapter and I’m back into reading mode! But these last few chapters made me say “WHOA! SH*~”!

Man, what does it for me are the varied emotional backgrounds and needs of the characters, what’s in their heads and what are they trying to fulfill to make them sub or dom. That whole scene with Gaara and Shikamaru was a serious highpoint for me. And I loved the way Gaara confronted Neji at Uchiha’s and Naruto going for the knife hidden in his boot. I’m like, “VIOLENCE --- Ooo~ GOODY!” I also liked how you showed Neji “in flux”. I can see why he would be resistant to subbing since he’s so dominated outside of the scene. It will be interesting to see what you have in store for him. Oh, and by the way -- "Uchiha's", "Manda's" and now "Roots" -- nice touch!

The egg-thing between Iruka and Kakashi – boy that was seriously brutal! But not just because of its obvious pain and humiliation, but the paradox of Kakashi willingly submitting his pride and body to all that pain and humiliation, to the point that it transcended into a twisted badge of pride for Kakashi to endure for his Iruka.

I also can’t wait to see more of Shino and Kankuro. I can see Kankuro pulling the strings, but Shino doesn’t have a simple mind despite how understated he may appear. That’s what I like about Shino. And I definitely can’t wait to see Kisame’s make his move on Itachi, quietly swimming beneath his prey, waiting for the right moment to make his kill (wheee~)!

wah.... the way you write these sessions are so imaginative and hot! my goodness i really like the way you weave elements of the show into reality like the shino's tattoos and the little play on words with leading him like a puppet on strings. i find that most of the stories i read have a hard time making elements from canon into actual reality that makes sense and you manage to incorporate it flawlessly. also think you have a gift/talent in explaining human emotions and needs. after reading kisame's logical reasoning for neji and shino to be subs, i was convinced myself. i really really hope that you plan to write a session with kankuro and shino... they're characters that need more love! thanks so much for sharing and can't wait for the next update!

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways: Itachi's POV on the jewellery issue and Kisame pulling his strings from behind. God how I would love to see Kisame really pull Itachi's strings - Red silk cord for strings tied around his neck, his chest his arms, and his cock, scooting around on a persian carpet chased by a paddle, and directed by his strings, Hmmmn, I'll work on a pic so you can see what I mean - Look Ma, no hands O.o, what do I have with strapping people's hands to their backs? Time to tame his bitch indeed XD. And OMG Shino, I love how you worked in the bugs, to have them skitter and shimmer across his flesh slick from sweat, damn. God woman, you make my mind run away with me, and LOL, he could be a cousin XD. Useless factoid about me - 1 racial mongrel - a mixture of African, Malaysian, Chinese, Portugese, Scottish and Carib-Indian (a west-indian islander extinct but for traces tribe). And those are the identifiable races, no one really knows where my Dad's father came from, but to all appearances he was black, he actually looked a lot like the guy on the All State commercials just with white hair, LOL. That was really interesting to me, that you would pick those races, so very close to my own. And Shino does look it, he really does, it's mainly about his hair. I also really really enjoyed Kisame's POV, I always do with you :D. He's such a devoted analytical, no nonsense creature. I love him, and Sai and Neji, interesting prospect. Not to mention I'm dying to find out what the hell is going on with that toilet brush O.o, LOL. Way to work for it Sasuke XD, it makes me wonder what must be going on in his proud head. And in Naruto's, he must be really enthralled. The crowning achievement of this chapter though was the mastery in working in the canon, all those subtle hints and quips, truly masterful. The puppetry, the insects, fuck it Kimmimaro's cross, the ultimate devotional sacrifice, perfectly suiting. Huggles, and showers adoration on Hestia-Goddess of the hearth XD. Hmmn the ShikaGaa pic is taking longer than I thought, but I'm almost there, hopefully I'll be done before the night is up.

Chapter 5... where Sasuke "broke..."

wow. just wow.

that was amazingly described. i think you really captured the feelings between a dom and the sub in a way that just... was so emotional and without the reader realizing what was really happening. must. keep. reading.

Read this you might like it.

http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=26666

I thought some of the stuff there were very creative.

Oh mistress please don't abandon your faithful!

I loved how Naruto didn't even look at Kakashi.

Once again you blow me away with the latest chapter, this story is amazing I love everything about it, I must confess I like the Naruto/Sasuke parts best but that's because I just love those two together, even is this story is totally OC I still adore and love it.

Can't wait till you update again, I totally understand about being busy, us fans will understand ;)

um for neji's dom you could put in kankuro or maybe genma or even asuma, or maybe even ibiki... just suggestion ^^ love your story keep up the good work

love how often you update. Isnt often you see fics like this! Btw was it really only yesterday sasuke and naruto met? I thought it was two days ago since there was the night, then shopping the next day, then.... isn't this the day AFTER that? But maybe I'm just confused ^^; Gwa. Great job tho!

Squee, you've totally made me fall in love with GaaShikaGaa, LOL, sounds like bad porn music - Gaa Shika Gaa Gaa XD!! LOL, so wrong - ignore me. They are definitely one of my fav couples in this fic... ... LOL, I just realised I love ALL the couples in this fic, okay maybe not the GaiLee pairing XD. God I'm so off track now, review the chapter. It's amazing how you got them to fit together, LOL, I'm very almost done with a pic I was working on the for the first ShikaGaa encounter, but now I wanna change it to GaaShika. LOL, it's too far gone for that, and the Gaara in the pic isn't really skinny at all, wiry but not skinny, anyway I'll send it later today, my brain can't seem to focus right now and I see there's another chapter, so O.O, yeah... The part about him smoking was sweet, in a gut wrenching sort of way. It made me sad, but glad all at the time and is it bad that the contents of Gaara's medicine cabinet reminded me of my brother, LOL, but then when you skateboard and do martial arts, you're bound to be real friendly with pain killers. I can't communicate how much I love this story. God, Gaara has to get Shika's stuff from Neji, LOL, they're not even gonna be in the club together an they're still gonna cause a stir. LOL, Naruto what you done XD. Wai!!!!! XD, the next chapter is a NaruSasu chappie and it's Looong XD, I'm gonna go eat and come back... It's not like you'll care or you'll know, why do I tell you these things XD LOL, It's too early in the morning to think straight - Forgive me :huggles: Allys.