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Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

love it!! The only person I could think of being Neji's Dom is Morino Ibiki, just because he is a master of mental torture and can mentally break down Neji.

Ok, how about Lee to Dom Neji. I know it's OOC but I think you could make it work. :D

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You're writing is some of the sexiest I've ever read...and I'm not really into heavy D/s. I want to congratulate you on your skillful role switches...it makes the story even more intricate, and seems to give the characters involved firmer relationships. I do wish there was plot involved, it make everything so much more exciting!
Thank you for the frequent updates.
~The Flame Reviews~

Oh man I need to have patience and wait for a while, that's okay i can do it. Another amazing chapter here. It ended on a slightly sad note though, it made me sad for Naruto, even though I'm pretty sure that Sasuke would agree anyway, Naruto is the kind of guy who would likely not ask, because of the obstacles in his head. But then I guess it'll make them cherish the time they do spend together before they come to terms, even more. I love that Sasuke feels like he's being spoiled, it's just so right, because he is spoiled, but he's always been spoiled with the wrong things, the things he doesn't need, while the things he does have been lacking. Naruto will fix that, Naruto will spoil him in every way possible :). The outfit was amazing in my head, I loved it, but my favourite part was the jewellery, very closely followed by the ribbons and the butt plug. The care and ceremony that went into dressing Sasuke was also amazing, is there anywhere I can see the slave bracelet? That entire scene in the apartment, so hott, so thoroughly distracting and engaging, that now I'm just a little jealous. And OMG!!! They just walked out just like that in full regalia, I was like O.O "Holy Crap!" Embarrassment! I would have died, but Go dhow I wish I was that brave, or that firmly entrenched in that place where I wouldn't care. I love this, it's like every little fantasy I've ever had and didn't know I wanted to have, come to life. That may be it, the reason why I adore your stories, I'm always trying to pinpoint it, but I suspect it may be a multitude of things. I didn't even notice when you changed POV from Sasuke to Naruto you did you so smoothly :D. And Itachi's little interference, was it meant to cause as much trouble as it did? It was a very subtle mind fuck, reminding Naruto of their status and turning and tainting things Sasuke would have associated just solely with Naruto to include his brother. That was masterful, a move truly worthy of Uchiha Itachi. Naruto's reply was also masterful XD, a little not so subtle reminder that he would fucking Sasuke within an inch of his life, all night. Damn lady, maybe I read too much into subtext, but those are some dangerous games. The scene with Gaara, oooooh! Talk about dangerous games, I love how staff just appeared out of nowhere. The power plays going on in here tonight, hhmmmmmn, very very gratifying, one of the reasons I love anime so very much, all the damn power plays XD. You do them so well. This story of yours, I adore it and it's stumping me, I don't feel like anything I could say would possible express fully how I feel. Thank you, Allys.

All I can say is mmmmmmmm! This chapter took my breath away! I'll just keep re-reading this untll you post again, it's mmmmm! I so love what you do with Naruto and Sasuke!:)

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Asuma... **still vey speechless**

I think maybe it should be Kiba/Neji...or maybe Shino and Neji??..

ah lovely, as expected. :-D the description of sasuke's dressing was so erotic but ooo will he be getting a tattoo also? that would be kinky. as for neji, ::thinks:: perphaps shino, he seems understanding and compliant. his yang to match neji's yin. but a really fun, but challanging guy would be KANKURO he's an awesome character and underated in most yaoi, and on the plus side he's gaara's brother, so that can make for interesting plot. update soon!

ha! that was the best chapter ever! :)
the idea of corset piercing appealed to me in particular; that would really look good on sasuke. you can get reeeally nasty infection from those, but i put faith in naruto's skills ;p. i'd draw a fanart of it but sadly i have too much projects going on, i'm a bit fed up with drawing and designing at the moment :(. anyway, the idea was great. i can imagine naruto would be a good partner in real word :)!