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for Captive Heart

by Jin

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Too bad it's only a oneshot, ah well, it was good while it laster- ending was a bit rushed though.
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is AWESOME!!! XD Tayuya/Naruto is my fav pairing, and you did this so well!!

Please add more, pleeeaaasseee!!!!! This just screams for more!! XD And could you maybe add a more detailed lemon??? O.o That'd be awesome!! XD
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will you continue your story of Captive Heart is seems like a great start and hope you update soon
person LadyKind
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was lovely....im looking foward to seeing a sequal??? PLEASE!!!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really like your take on Tayuya.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I like were this is going. Your creativity is quitea refreshing pace with this story. Please keep up the good work.
person RacerX78
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic.

I hope you write more of this kind of pairing because your right they're aren't enough good lemons. Well hope you continue this story, best of luck to you.