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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to offend, but your story freak the heck out of me. I mean Kakashi have sex with Kakashi beacause of a bet.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that this is a Sasuke MPREG story? For one those stories are great and secondly there are not many of them out there and there are too many Naruto mpregs stories out there.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story went from decent to just ugh in a matter of 3 or 4 chapters. I'd stop at the point where Naruto got pregnant, or found out he was pregnant, and start over from there. Slow down, think about what your doing a bit more and maybe find someone to run your ideas against.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this ch. seemed a bit rushed. other then dat i liked it...^^" well,ja ne AoiKitsune
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You rushed. This should have been at least three chapters.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude... hes soooo preggo! hahaha lovey lil naru!!
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude... hes soooo preggo! hahaha lovey lil naru!!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHH!!!! *screams* This is AWSEM!!! you have to update soon!!!! *Grins!*
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nya!!! Naru-chan has food Poisoning?! mawhahaha yea....rite....
winkwink dis is a 1st Kakashi being Naru's Huby. heh gah
cant wait!! wait am i rite plz say yes!!! update asap PLZ!!
AoiKitsune wishs u da best of luck. =^-^= luv da fic keep it up!!
winkwink dis is a 1st Kakashi being Naru's Huby. heh gah
cant wait!! wait am i rite plz say yes!!! update asap PLZ!!
AoiKitsune wishs u da best of luck. =^-^= luv da fic keep it up!!