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for Jesus what the hell was that !?

by vanessaclarke

schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it when Sasuke gets tortured. But now the question: who could be Sasuke's boyfriend? There is no other Naruto. And will Sasuke be seme or uke? I vote uke. That means a dominant male. Hmmm. Gaara, Neji ooooh Shika.
person Rosebud
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This has to be the best Itachi/Naruto fic EVER! I kept thinking that you were going to make it a threesome, but you didn't and I'm SO HAPPY for that! It think that it would have taken something away from the story... I don't know (shrugs). I'm just glad that you wrote it the way that you did. (laughs) I'm rambling now...
So WOW...yeah, this story was FUCKING HOT all the way around! Awesome Job! XD
Will you be writing more??? PLEASE say yes!!!!
person Kylie
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you didn't do a threesome. I would have hated that. Its nice that Itachi only payed attention to Naruto & that Sasuke also only payed attention to Naruto. I thought that was so hot how possessive Itachi got at the end. Any chance you could write another chapter to this or write another Ita/Naru story. I love exhibitionism, so if you could add that to the mix I would just love it.
person DismalAbstraction
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love you!! Love that you made it more than a 2 shot! Can't wait for more! Love Ita/Naru! Also like how you portrayed him in this chapter!!!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Three words for you Wow. That was so good. Great job. Going to go take a cold shower now. hahaha Look forward to reading your future works. Take care and god bless. Now off to my shower.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! That was great!
Me likes it a lot.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was funny lol. the things you learn when you spy your hot brother paying homage to the almost equaly hot blond boy which you secretly think is cute. awww poor sasuke just found out he can get it up over boys lol. great fic love your stuff.

ja ne!
person Carola
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This. Is. Love.
Short, funny AND sexy! Nice job!
I nearly died when Itachi went 'I'm going paintballing actually'
Me: "NO WAAAAY!" xD
First ItaNaru I've actually read and liked! ^___^
Can I dare hope for a second chappie?
person A Ravens Song
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loed it! It was funny.
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG YES!! ^.^ I have a clinically diagnossable obsession with the holy freaking trinity of Itachi Sasuke and Naruto, and I have to say that was an awesome use of said three. Itachi always has what Sasuke wants, ne? mmm, I can smell the hot boysmex and SoloM coming on the wind. ^.^ *dies of blood loss*