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for Jesus what the hell was that !?

by vanessaclarke

person gaara89
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. i'm so glad you finally finished it.
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I love it! You did such a good job with both the lemons and the portrayal of the story. I wish I could see more of it though. Keep writing such delicious stories. Ja!
person S_R
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
; - ; No waaaay, an ending? *sad*
I loved this fic, I wish you'd do the Wedding or something, it'd be so cute!

Oh well, great story, I loved it ^^
Consider a sequel? =D
person Blood Stained Butterfly
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.
It's defineately my favorite.
It's so sweet and so damn funny, I just could not stop laughing.
I can't wait to read the next update. Fantastic work, as always.
person cutsycat
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. I can't wait for more. As I said in my review on fanfiction.net I think this is a great story and that my idea would be a funny twist, but it's just a suggestion. I'm sure that whatever you come up with will be just as good. Just hurry up and post!
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved the ending to this latest chapter it was so funny, plz update soon
person alwayzonsomething
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE this fan-fic!!! I cant wait for the next chapter and the prequel to come out! You are definitely my favorite author!!!
person tata
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, sneaky plot and all. Please continue. I love the scenes, but I like that it has a purpose too. I especially love the kyu/sasu action. hehe Keep going!!!!

tata
person Lihrah
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAGH! DAMN YOU! DAMN YOU TO THE FIERY LEMONLESS PITS OF HELL HEATHEN!

Such an evil, /evil/, EEEEEEEEEEEEEBIIIIIIL cliffie!

But on another note, it wouldn't surprise me at all if poor ol' Fugaku-san just clean passes out.
Teehee.

cookie?

~Lihrah
person Alondra
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Yes a lovely proposal," said Fugaku, "...But to a Bloody BOY!!!"

"Uh..." Sasuke frantically cast about for something to say. "Oops."

HAHAHA that is just great!! freaking great!! I love this story its all been awesome! I look forward to the update, whenever it may come! ^^