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by ursweetheartless

person KKM
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Balls
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE this fic! It's so out of the ordinary. I'm still eagerly awaiting the parts that would cause this story to be 'wrapped in plastic and behind the counter' ^_^ Love ya *kissy*
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting chapter. I loved the Sasuke drama. I'm glad Sasuke and Naruto and growing closer together.
=)
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say I love this story. I can't wait for the next update
person janas
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter...its been so long since u updated but thankfully i still remember da story

btw...i think u may ave copied chapter 6 twice, it took me a while to figure out dat im reading it twice lol

update soon
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uhh as always great story can't wait to see how things go, i hope sasuke and naruto get together they seem better for eachother, but this chapter was posted twice, as in when it finished it restarted at the beginning, so u might want to fix that , very confusing
person ringpop
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoah that last chapter kind of repeated itself there.....OHHH*squeal* SASUKE KISSED NAAAR-UUU-TOOOO!!!
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter but I am not sure if you are aware but this chapter ended and then repeated the whole thing again.

I keep wondering if Sasuke is jealous of Naruto because Itachi just isn't (and hasn't been) spending time with him or if it is because he wants to be the only one for Itachi (Uchihacest). I know for me, I am just hoping that it is the former instead of the latter (I am not a fan of incest) but even if it is the latter, I will still enjoy this story because it is just way to good not to. Besides, I know the pairings are ItaNaru ItaSasu and SasuNaru.

I wonder how does Naruto feel with Sasuke calling him a slut? And you put in here that Naruto loves Itachi, but is it just a love a slave has for his master or a romantic love? Hmm, I will just wait for those questions to be answered.

I look forward to your next update.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more? please!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so ahppy to see your update. enjoyed it to. looking forward to the next bit.