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by Meian

person hisoka
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your ch.s are so short but i like 'em
update soon
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You don’t have to be so shy. If you are blushing like that when I’m dressed, what will you do when I’m naked? I look even better without my clothes, you know?

O_O shit he's conceited as hell!!! Heh - but that's what makes him hot loool and Narutp was blushing awwwwww and he passed and he was the best!!! WELL DONE NARUTO YOU ROCK!!!

heh, i wonder what will happen when they realise who they are :D and Kakashi reading his porn *snickers* wonder if he practices on the dolphin ^_6 I can't help thinking this way, my pervert streak is getting worse lol

Anyway, cool chp.!!! I'm loving this story ^_6

Hina xXxx
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ur AN has to be one of the very best i've read in years! not to mention the story rocks!
person keitaros_kero_neko
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I LOVE your story so far! Please continue updating, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I wish I had your guts for the assignments you were talking about. I'd never be able to do something like that, I'm always the shy person that sits in the back corner and ends up being liked by the teacher just because I don't do anything...

YOU ROCK!!
person keitaros_kero_neko
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*nervous laugh* I know I already reviewed, but I forgot to add this, I thought you might appreciate it since the people are a lot like how Naru and Sasu were acting in your first chapter.

Check out the third thing called "If Abbott and Costello were..." at http://www.emmitsburg.net/humor/archives/computer/computer_5.htm
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heyho ^_________^

Hmm, what should I say *thinks*
Your plot is pretty interesting and probably unique ^^ the
characters are acting realistic and more importantly authentic
And oh my gosh, I loved how Sasuke teased poor little Naruto
on the telephon. Damn, I laughed my ass off ^^
Stupid little Naruto don't know anything about Computers
Altough ...
I'm probably not much better than him... Thank god for these help
hotlines ^^
So, Sasuke has to go to the psychiatrist interesting, very interesting...
Hmmm, what will happen to him if Naruto finds out about his identity?
Revenge is sweet, ne?
Or maybe Naruto won't find out and will fall in love with Sasuke (altough I really
doubt this, especially if Sasukes stays the same old bastard ^^)
So I'm very curious how you're going to develop your story...
So please update soon
^_________^ Bakuma (hope you don't mind my bad English ^^")

person btTara
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD love it! It's very original. I wonder if Naruto and Sasuke will recognize each other. Anyways I love computers because they are stupid without you. Update soon!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a total kicker! Sasuke's lack of attention span is very endearing; his vocabulary is also rather entertaining! But unfortunately kind of reminds of the freaking idiots I have to call at HP service center because my laptop broke down three times and it's not even three years old! Trust me if you are buying your PC don't buy it from HP, their products are garbage and services are crappy with expensive price tags!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww now it's Naruto's turn to help Sasuke ^^ I'm so glad he could his computer fixed ^^ heheh Sasuke's too cute!
I can't wait to see what happen next!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i soo like where this is going and seeing you'd updated made me happy - am i right in guessing naruto is gonna somehow end up as angry sasuke's psychiatrist? heh that would just be loool frigging great ^_6 thanks for the update

Hina xXxx