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for Enslavement

by sharingan154

person Tleilaxu
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent stuff keep at it!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! Keep up the great work!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thats pretty good. Keep going!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far this has been a pretty good fic. I'm really liking the idea you're using, and the only thing I'd like to see more of would be some more detail in the sexual acts.
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow intense chapter. Ino really deseves to be a slave. Too bitchy for her own good. Now she's treated like the whore ahe is. Ironic because of how willing she'd do Sasuke. Update.
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGG i see naruto in a new light. i need more
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like. I can't wait to see what Naruto is going to do to her next after all 5 days are left. Keep up the great work.
person Zendura
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice set up! I'm always disappointed by the lack of good Naru/Ino! I hope you continue this story. If ideas are needed feel free to drop me an email, I could of had so much fun with this premise if I had thought of it!
person Tleilaxu
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking hot! keep it up. If I may suggest you add regular sex too. Perhaps even a kage bunshin orgy. And since I have a twisted mind may I suggest that Ino begins to really like it and becomes Narutos girlfriend/wife and gets Sakura all jealous?

Enough with my suggestions, this is an awesome story keep it updated.
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! That was great! I agreed with Thleilaxu's idea. Maybe you should put Naruto and Ino together. But can you make Sakura fall in love with Naruto? I love Naru/Ino/Saku threesome.


Anyway, please continue!