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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! lemony sequel it is! and hopefully of some decent length (not some dinky little, not-even-a-full-page-on-my-screen kind of sequel. i hate it when they do that!)so yeah, loved it and want more (i really liked your writing style). keep up the good work!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this one shot. I'd love to see it turn into more than that too. Your style of writing is totally believeable and the characters are written really well. This is one of my favourites, and I'va laready read it twice today! don't drop this story line if you dont think it's finished, moer would always be appreciated!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ur so uber cool..!! wooot..!! keep it up.. we're greatly hoping for its sequel.. ^^
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O i liked the taste definitely, I mean i'd eat ramen all the time if it would get naruto to do that to me looool :D and the kisses XD *laugh evilly* brilliant *thumbs up* and HAWT!!! And a sequel you say? *shivers* heh can not wait for that. Nice :D
Hina xXxx
p.s. *snickers* sakura is such a pervert :d she's finally joined our side ^_6
Hina xXxx
p.s. *snickers* sakura is such a pervert :d she's finally joined our side ^_6
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Naruto thinks Sasuke tastes better than ramen! Sweet story! :)
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.......wow.....x_x....-fans self- just the kissing was HOTT!! I think I might going into seizures for the sequel XD...oh jeeze.....I can't wait!!! Please hurry!!
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii! SEQUEL! XD