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for Look At Me

by bkdragone

person Arcangel3012
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well clearly that person didn't know what they wre talking about when they said, "Japanese people daon't look like that." Well duh. It is known for a fact that the artist draw characters the way they wish they could see themselves. Asian people tend to like tall, blonde and blue-eyed characters because those genes are not common in there chemical make-up. People tend to want what they can't or don't have. Other than that I think that your story is very creative. As for who shold punch Genma I think that it should be either Sauske of Kakashi. It should be Kakashi if that is who you want Sakura to end up with, however, if you are not it should be Sauske. I believe it would be more in-character for him to do so. Sai is too emotionally constipated to want to do such a thing.

Arcangel3012 (I am not logged in because I am to lazy.)
person Lexie
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... I prefer Sasuke. Definitely Sasuke.
person Megami Wolfchild
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that it should be kakashi. for some reason, i really like the kakasaku pairing (when she is older). I really like your story so far. I hope it isn't long before the next chapter!
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it with the small changes. Especially Sai's part. I would normally vote for Kakashi, but something is telling me to go for Sasuke as my choice.
person Casselia
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is an interesting start they are all caged in together. Can't wait to see where you take the story next and the reasons why Sakura has been left neglected for so long by all these yummy guys.
person Jovianwolfgirl
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I think Sakura should really be with Kakashi in those one. I don't think Sasuke would able to she her and a lover. Will maybe for a bit but it won't last long. Update soon!
person ice
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i vote Sasuke and Naruto
person Darkside the Fallen Angel
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a. Kakashi all the way
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad I still liked it, and I still love Sai. Hmm about the pairings... how about all of the above... or maybe I'll just wait to state my choice till I have more info... although all is tempting... Haha poor Saku all her guys are ploting against her having a normal social/sex life... even Sai unwittingly. Great job, and thanks so much for updating.
person tesa32_youko
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story so far!!! Please, oh please update as soon as possible! Also, could you try to make the chapters longer? Other than that, I'll be checking every day for the next chapters! Thanks.