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Whoa! Didn't see that coming. Sakura and Naruto. I guess it makes sense. How will Sasuke take that little gem? Can't wait for next chap to find out.
Rox

Getting really good! I can't wait to see what the boys do to that bartender. ;)

Ill have to reread and compare, but as of right now this chapter is the best so far!!! Very intense and serious and leading and I cant wait to read more!!! So she has decided to sleep with Naruto, but I get the feeling she would enjoy it more if she asked Sasuke. That's if the two of them could stop being so stupid for one night and get through it like normal adults who are attracted to each other do. I agree with several other reviewers, its definitely set up well for a Sasuke/Sakura fic.

YAAYAAAAAAA I Like This
please Update More Often Please

Great chapter! Detective Sai, was an interesting twist and very amusing. I can't wait til the next chapter. Keep up the good work and keep updating as soon as you can.

I'm diggin it
Can't wait for next chappie

One thing that was good is human trafficking is a serious subject. And it is a problem that it would be nice to be resolved in fiction if not reality. Another item that was good was using a hospital scene showing Sakura has been weakened, which makes her facing the challenge herself impressive. One thing that was bad was maybe establish at the beginning of the scene who is present. I am lazy, so I read over the paragraph twice before I realized the character speaking was Kakashi. It is difficult though without the writing appearing to be stage instructions. I thought the chapter continued the story well. I would like to see Naruto and Sakura together.

AWWWW I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON

Hey! I love your story... your sister must be clueless to not look at the author notes and know it was you. My birthday is on thursday (5/3) and I would love if a chapter came out by then. I wonder if you could get one out there. I love the idea of the plot, I wanna see Genma's reaction to Sakura's situation. I love Sasuke, Sai, Naruto, and Kakashi (along with most of the Akasuki) for guys and love Sakura for girls. (btw besides this one other fic that is Itachi x Sakura, THIS IS MY FAVORITE!) muah!
xoxo AJ, your honest (and biggest) fan

c. Kakashi

A. because he is stronger and he can make it hurt more
B.he can beatthe hell out of Genma literally