rate_review Reviews

I like your story alot. I was afraid for a while that you were going to make Genma the one who had drugged her which would have irritated me cause I am currently in love mode with that character but I see now that you didn't . I like the team dynamics you set up and the characterizations seem good. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice story keep it up, I hope Sakura gets cured and as for who she should go with I say Naruto and Sasuke... and please don't mention my name in the story if you choose to reply to this thanks. Just use Unknown dude or something.

can't wait for next chapater Now that I am thinking about it I think I would like kakashi and sakura I can see naruto, sai, and sasuke as her " big brother/best friends" type. Please put sakura and kakashi. PLEASE

AFTER READING THE REVIEWS I HAVE TO AGREE THAT THIS FIC DOES SEEM LIKE A SAS/SAK FIC. BUT I DO LOVE KAKA/SAKURA AS A COUPLE.

Poor Genma....and the med-nin. She must have looked pretty bad and why would sexy Genma be with someone that looked so bad even Sai would call her Saggy! LOL Unless I misunderstood that part.....

Oy! I'm sorry!! *smacks self on the forehead for getting bitchy* I didn't mean to come off like an ass, and I misunderstood a bit. I'm newer to the site, but have read lots and lots (and lots) of fanfiction over the years, and I guess I got the wrong impression. Too many people do play the ransom game just to be annoying, but I understand now that that was NOT the case here. I understand setting a goal and working for it, and if it's going to produce a better chapter, then I'm all for doing what's best for you. Once again, I apologize. I promise not to write when I am sleep anymore. ;)

Thanks for writing the story though, and I'll get back to reading it and probably review again (and try to be constructive... the last one I couldn't get my thoughts out, so I doubt it helped). But thank you. =)

The story has a lot of good points. Very good story line. I have never read one like this before, but I cant but help to say that it's Kurenai not Kunai... thats the throwing knife they use... and why don't they question the bartender or Genma where they got the drug? Anyways I really want to see Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura get together. Just because I think it would make for an akward position in the story line and I would like to see how that turns out. As for the chapter it turned out for an interesting position. I didn't see Kakashi being the one to hit Genma cause I thought he had left the room.

I liked the chapter, I think the story is really good. I thought the drug and the new mission sounds promising (good.) The only thing I thought was particularily bad was how short it was. My all time favorite couple is Sasuke and Sakura, I'd like them together. Thank you.

I thought the plot was very good it can improve in imaginary and the chapter makes you long for more wishing that Sakura would wake up already and I would really like Sai and Sakura together.

yet, another path i didn't see coming.

good: a story with a plot. those are so few these days.

bad: date rape drugs. those are among the few things i can't forgive mankind for.

pairing wish: at least a little naruto/sakura. those are so few now and days. i've seen kakashi and saskue with her, and have no clue who sai is.

another most excellent chapter. i look forward to the next update.