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i think so far the story is good. since it's still so young, there's not a lot to say...i still don't know really where the plot is going. i think you deserve that i review since i read it today. and annnndd...i would like to see sakura and sasuke in this one...so far what you've got in here about his concern would lead rather nicely in that direction.

1. The whole drugged plot, I haven't seen a plot like this yet.....and I read ALOT of KakasSaku.
2. You misspelled 'things' in your author note at the bottom.
3. I really liked this chapter!!!
4. Kakashi+Sakura....What can I say I love the pairing!

OK I hope this counts as a qualifying review... I love the plot idea, a poison that makes a person pretty much a slave - i could think of a few good uses for that -__- I hate the fact that it does not bode well for Sakura. I have faith in the pink haired wonder, but in this she is a virgin, just getting used to sexual notions and now she has to worry about the drug, what the master will do to her and a potential war if their mission isn't successful. That's alot of weight to carry on one's shoulders. I thought this chapter was pretty good, a little on the short side - but you've already stated your reasonings behind that. I think the only thing missing was maybe a little more insight on this drug that they're dealing with. You know maybe Tsunade has some knowledge of how to fight against it - not an antidote per se, but a counter active? Maybe someway to help these girls first, before killing the leaders or master. Oh well, just my opinion and now I'm rambling. As for pairings, I still stand by my previous review, I love her paired with all of them, whether it's a group thing (i.e. SakuxTeam7) or anyone of her team mates individually. Please update as soon as you can, I am loving this story more and more, and can't wait for the fluff!!

The overall story is good. The only bad thing I could see was a few spelling/grammar errors. I like that this story actually has some substance and not just fluff. I really like Sakura with anyone except Sai. I think for this story though, I would like to see her with Sasuke.

Keep up the good work.

Rox

I couldnt see much of a change in the overall chapter. I like rereading them though and it was still as good as the rough draft.

I think you've done a good job so far. There are a few very minor spelling mistakes, but I love the plot. I can't wait til the next chapter. Sakura/Kakashi is my favorite pairing and then after that I would like to see Sakura/Naruto.

Good: I love the translated version of Sasuke's "Dont tell him." That was great. I like the plot idea. With the drug and the kidnappings leading the team out on a mission. I like plot. Plot is good.
Bad: Hmmm....How did Genma get the drug or did he? Or was it put into her sake by the bartender that had come around to ogle her like a pig that he is? Also, Naruto...Dramatic much? Not that it was totally bad but it was sort of over the top maybe. And its another poor Sakura story like she's some weak pathetic thing. Sorry, but Ive read so many poor Sakura stories that make her out to be so weak and whiny. Maybe its because of how she was written in her genin days in the manga. Its all Kishimoto's fault!!! LOL She's not my fave character. And not because I prefer the boys (Sexy). LOL
What I think: I think that I have answered this one in answering the first two questions to some extent. I liked that the chapter was used to direct us towards the main plot of the story. But the story seems to be a nice mixture of tension, who gets to screw Sakura senseless?, and the seriousness of the plot, will she be screwed willingly? Sorry, but I cant help but laugh now. I really do love the story otherwise I wouldnt keep coming back.
"Who gets the girl: My vote Sasuke! And Sasuke only because I dont think he wuld be the type to share even if it was with his best friend. Kakashi gets my second vote because he deserves it more than the others.

Ok, so I was reading through the reviews and something someone said about all four of the boys getting Sakura made me think. You should do a chapter devoted for each couple and then have Sakura decide who she wants after she's tasted all four flavors!!! LMAO!!! I would read it!

----One thing you thought was good

The mixture of humor, character depth, and plot. Each chapter has left me both amused and interested.
(oh, and how you describe Sai is hilarious...I was laughing for a while when I read your comment on him being an emotional retard)

_____One thing you thought was bad
Sasuke is moody, but not as bad as you describe him at times...

_____What you thought of the chapter
Short and sweet, but with a twist that puts you on edge for the next chapter(s)!!!


_____Who you want together

SASUKE AND SAKURA!!! (soften him up a bit hehe)

hopefully not a threesome...as nice as those are, doesn't seem a Sakura personality in this story...

Wow, they are all in a tough spot. I do agree with Tsunade no matter how hard it was to say it. I think the best bet is for someone to take care of Sakura's virgin status asap. Ok well at least after she wakes up. Hmmm I would enjoy seeing sakura with any of them, but especially kakashi sensei. I cant wait to see more of this story. I like your plot line and cant wait to see it develope. Very nice work.