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for Look At Me

by bkdragone

person Mageblood
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The honor of punching Genma should definitely go to Kakashi!!!!!!!!

I love your story and how you make it to where you can’t tell what direction it will end up going!!!!!

And again I vote for the Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura paring
And in second voting place is Kakashi/Sakura
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a twist at the end. Planned? I liked it either way. Cant wait for more. Man Sakura has a lot fo horny guys after her. Wish I were in her shoes!
person RAW19
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i never expected the fic to take that path. i find myself impressed.
person crazy...slightly insane
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was mean!!! She fell asleep!! LMFAO...this was good REALLY GOOD! I can't wait to read more!
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh Genma's in trouble.... Great chapter, yeah lucky Saku, I wanna touch Kakashi's hair too... soft. Hmm interesting how this chapter worked out like you said not a fun as the others but interesting. You made Genma a not so nice guy, interesting I think this is the fisrt time I've eveer seen him portrayed that was... so kudos to you! Sorry about not reviewing the last chapter, it was good to, I like the idea that all the males are very interested in Sakura and not just from the stand point of a sexual interest -although I believe that is a big draw- but also from the stand point of them all being so close to her, she's their girl just as much as they are her guys, I like the play on that. Can't wait till the next chapter thanks so much for writing.
person JanBlan
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey keep going, I love this story. Sakura did get lucky in the end, too bad she fell asleep.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE THIS STORY ALOT I THINK SAKURA SHOULD HAVE A NIGHT WITH ALL OF HER GUYS. YEAH I LIKE THAT SAKURA WITH THE GUYS FROM TEAM 7. THIS STORY IS SOO GOOD IT'S RIGHT UP THERE WITH LEMONDROPS AND J POP PRINCESS. BRAVO AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
person raefire
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute!! Rescued by her boys!!!!
Someone is in deep shit!!
person TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im really liking this plot idea, mainly because you've fit in so much good anime humor :) Please continue. I've read way too many serious fics since the last time I read a really funny-haha-snicker-snicker-ohsnap fic.

Boooooo, booooo!! Kaka/Saku, booooo!! It's so godawful a pairing. It makes me want to horf out my lungs.

Never read a Sai/Saku, didn't think it would be all that logical. But what you did with them was interesting.

Who the heck is Genma? Please don't say Xover, =T

Chiao,
TEOATG&B
person JanBlan
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Keep up the good work. Honestly I would like to see more Kakashi and Sakura action. Well just more Kakashi. Cause he is like my favorite character also. Keep up the great work. Oh, who should punch Genma? Of course Kakashi should.