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Nonono why didn't this amazing storey continue! So good, I LOVE yonkaka. The bit where he told Kakashi not to take off his mask mademy heart flutter... and I love the new development with Hizashi- what will Minato do when je finds out he has seen Kakashi's face?!

Just stumbled on this fic (was looking for good Yondaime/Kakashi fics) and read it through, and I have to say, you've done brilliantly with it, though the last chapter or so look like you maybe need to change the format so the editing marks don't interfere with the story. But you probably know that.
Had me in stiches for about half the story, laughing so hard I couldn't breathe. VERY well done. And I like the slowly developing relationships, the way Naruto befriends everyone, Minato's obliviousness and jealousy...the whole nine yards.
Hizashi flirting with Kakashi had me somewhat astounded, somewhat amused, and very much looking forward to the eventual fall out Minato's going to have with his own emotions because of this. (Evil of me, but there you have it.)
I am definitely eager to read more, though for such quality chapters as you have I'm willing to wait if you need me to.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

I absolutely luv ur fic... I just wish there was more!
Luv the way u characterize the Yondaime and Kakashi... even tho now we know the story to be completely different than u wrote, i can still imagine this happening if the Yondaime hadnt died and there was such a possibility for Kakashi and the Yondaime to be together. Hope u update soon!

Amazing story. you should really update!

loving this story! can wait to see what happens next, please update soon =)

I had this bookmarked on ff.net, and was literally depressed when I went to read it again some days ago and it was gone. Just on a vague whim today I did a search and found it on aff.net, so I am deliriously happy again. I don't know if you have any plans to continue since it's been so long, but I still enjoy coming back to read this. I adore the interactions with Kakashi and Yondaime, plus the familial scenes with them and Naruto. Even if you've left it off I hope it stays up just to have a nice read to go back to.

One of the best fics I've read... Yond/Kaka are really cute and denial it's definitly not just a river in egypt. Please up date again! I miss this story.

Hahahaha ah PML! Love it love it! Updates pahlease!

Hahaha Love it! Absolutely love this story, its the first one i check for updates for =p! Anticipation for something has well and truly set in haha... Cant wait for the next one =D

I'm floored :) (yes, I know, I can't spell..). This is such an interesting take on the characters, and as a Minato-fan, I'm thrilled to see him shine! I love the MinatoKakashi pairing, but there surely cannot be any question as to who is on top? Now, I usually love Naruto, and I also love this one you've created, but he also does have the flaws of a child, which I like that you put in, (the joy at making Sasuke cry etc.). I LOVE Kakashi, he is fantastic to experience at his 18 years of age :D. I'm sitting at the edge of my chair, waiting for Minato to JUMP Kakashi, it's gonna be GREAT!
I'm amazed and jumping around in joy because of how you use the quotes to describe the chapters and everything. It's fantasticly done, and I'm really looking forward to reading more! :)