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for The World Was All Before Him

by SuishouTenshi

person gaara89
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!! Please continue soon!
person Hannah
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that Kakashi is Naruto's mama.
person jbjewel
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's hard to pick one! Gai, Iruka and Neji are all very logical choices. Any would work though.
person aiesha
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! F'ing hillarious!! i only made it to chapter four before i had to go to class, but i love your sotry!!! i also love the slight AU of Kakashi. (kakashi in chibi form a.k.a. a kid, is just f'ing hillarious!) you know what your doing, i love it! sorry, can't stop saying it............... I LOVE YOUR FIC!!

now, i have to go to the hospital so they can put stitches into my sides from laughing so hard... haahaha, love it....

keep up the good work! ja matta.
person lokivsanubis
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should introduce Gai and Iruka in the same chapter but i get the feeling that if you did Gai the chapter would be funny. SO yeah introduce Gai. That would be interesting. LOL.
person kallipso
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story I hope that I will get to read more of it.
person Jadejj
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I would like to read about Neji or Iruka in the next chapter :)
person Hannah
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I'd like to see Neji.
person aiesha
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Iruka would be an interesting take. Because in the anime there were hints about Kakashi and Iruka being, in old european terms "intimate friends" or something or other. I dunno, maybe it's just an appealing topic for me... introduction of Iruka that is. After that i think Gai would be hillarious... so if your going to stick to comedy, Gai. for something along the serious note: Iruka.

Love your fic btw. almost cried out of joy and surprise because of Naru-chan's first word. WWKD? What will Kakashi Do? lol...sorry. Keep up the good work, looking forward to your next chapter. until next time- midnight. Ja matta.
person lauren
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am a TERRIBLE reviewer, but I thought I would because I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH. This is right in my toolbar of favourites (the firefox, del.icio.us thingo) and I check EVERY DAY hoping you have updated. And then I make very loud noises of JOYJOYJOY. :-)

In conclusion: I love your writing, your characterisations...okay, EVERYTHING, and look forward to seeing more (hopefully soon:-))