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for The World Was All Before Him

by SuishouTenshi

person Mikra
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm speechless. This was amazing.
person Spindy
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAhhh I can't wait to be updated!!XD Anyway I'd like Naruto not to just say a word... well ok start with one word such as Sasuke (or any other name) or ramen even... but after been saved, wouldn't be a shock if he started to talk full sentences and talks like an adult or even better in front of the Uchihas! And his reason of not talking earlier would be hilarious such as "It was Troublesome"?
Take that from the Number One surprising Ninja! Wooo love SasuNaru!

P.S:Will kyuubi be present in your fic... for e.g the mist nins threaten Narutos life and Kyuubi came killing them/ coming to his consiousness?
person Luna_Meow
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the best I've ever read!! :D I can't help thinking that Naruto and Sasuke are so adorable (although this story is mostly on Minato :P ) It's funny, sometimes cute, sometimes moving and touching (a bit), but overall it's amazing.

I don't know why I think of Naruto's first word to be "-dattebayo", hehe.

Keep it up! :)
person clowangel
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing his first word to be either 'Sasuke', 'pervert/hentai', or 'ramen'. o.O; And by the way, I'm not serious. ^^; lol

Anyway, great fanfic. I'm really loving it. A lot. =) Beautiful story. I also didn't expect Sasuke to be in it but he is! And it's a cute and sweet Sasuke too! Yippee!
person kyu77ryu
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What can I say?

This is the most unique and one of the best (if not the best) fic that I've ever read.

Cheers to your great work!

Keep up the good work!
person Haru
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, um... what an a-hole Yondaime is o_o. I just got to the 'don't tell him about his mother' line and... that's just cruel and really selfish. I hope her ghost comes to haunt him, because that's like saying 'whoops, sorry for dying... he won't ever know you though. And I'll make sure he won't care either, you're just here to have my baby and go away :)'. I mean... seriously. Really, I think that was the only part of this fic so far that didn't sit well with me.


Er... Naruto is cute though XD. And Kakashi gets points for being like 'What o_o??'. So... yeah XD.
person nsg
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I bet it has to do w/ the Sannin, like pervert-toad or something. Or something cute like "kashi".
person 2321
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought they were going to finally kiss. Stupid Jiraiya for ruining the moment. I'm excited about the next chapter. I really want to know what the plot is.
person meliana
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Instead of a first word can it be a first sentence. I hope you don't make Naruto stupid. Please make him smart, hot, funny, and confident. Kindda like the Yondaime, but a shorter version. I hope he doesn't turn out like how he is on the show. I think that's the reason I stopped watching the show is that he is just so stupid. Most of the things that comes out of his mouth are just so stupid and obvious. You don't have to make him strong right away. That can be one of the things that he's struggling on. Just please please please i beg you don't make him stupid.
person Lucia
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I only have one word for this.... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
The fight in the beggining was SUPERB!! and the image of little Sasuke hanging from Jiraya's back while giggling just... oh gods so ubberly CUTE!!!!!!!!! ^___________________________^
And of course that little YonKaka scene was fantastic! ;D Yondaime's possesive words to Kakashi's pretty face made me smirk so much my chicks are hurting :D and the Sannin' teasing cracked me up xD
Poor Sasu-chan crying next to Naru-chan's cribb, made me tear up T.T Just like Minato's disspair...
Gods, this great fic keeps giving me all kind of emotions ^__^
Can't wait to see next chapie... with Naru's first word... may it be Sasuke? or Kakashi? or Daddy? Ero-sennin may be? xD The last one would be awesome... and the first one just sweet ;D Can't wait to know it!!!!!
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!