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for The World Was All Before Him

by SuishouTenshi

person Dragon7
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Naruto first word will be Sasuke.
person Jadejj
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Naruto's first word would either be Sasuke or Ramen...Good chapter :D
person qwerty
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
either dattebayo or ramen ... or Sasuke
Finally! An update! Nice chapter!
person SasUke28
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOO when you gonna udpate cuz i loveeeeeeeee this story!It is too cute!
person Spindy
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NEED TO SAY?!... ITS FANTASTIC... LOVE CHIBI SASUXNARU.. QUICK UPDATE!!
person Finnel
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so good! its funny and sweet in places and i love the fact that at age 3 naruto still hasn't said a word! ((my little brother didn't start talking until he hit 4))
please continue to update!!!
person Dragon7
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i swear i love this damn story. i just have one quick question was you talking about kakashi alone or both kakashi and sasuke when you was talking about loyality. that was so cute how lil' sasuke was protecting lil' naruto from jiraiya and also how you have sasuke as naruto's interprator. also i like how you laid down the foundationsfor some of the issues that naruto and sasuke will likely face in the future. i can't wait for the next update.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot! Your doing very well please keep it up!!! I look forward to the next chappie!
person Lucia
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! ^________________^
I love Naruto and his personal Interpreter =D They are so cute!!!!!!!!! xD
And Jiraiya's apearance was awesome!! So THAT's how Kakashi's obsession with Itcha Itcha begannn mmmhh... I wonder what will Arashi say when he finds out ;D
Sasuke not holding to much respect for the toad-sannin in the end was too much for my sistem: I still have the silly smile on my face ^_________________________________________^
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!