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for The World Was All Before Him

by SuishouTenshi

person gaara89
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very good! Please continue soon!
person Lucia
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiyas!!!!
This story is AMAZING!!!!! ^_______^
Little Naruto is adorable, and baby Sasuke is SO MUCH CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it when he went directly to Itachi's arms... so... KAWAII!!!!!
Also, young Kakashi is GREAT! xD Baby sitting so many babies in the same night... I did it once... Mind wrecking sitation, I tell you... ;P
I can't wait for next chapter, and I really really REALLY hope that Naruto and Sasuke can be friends, and for real reasons, not only the family's political ones.
BTW, I can't wait to find out if the masacre will happen... CHAN! so many things I wanna see happening in this fantastic fic ;D
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!!
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you portrayed Sasuke. Itachi aruging with Kakashi was funny. Look forward to the next chapter. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
person Shayss
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...
I must say, I am in love with this story.
It made me giggle.
I look forward to the next chapter!
(And next time I review, I will say something useful XD
But right now, it's currently 12:23am I have to go to work at 6am
and I'm suffering from heartburn >< so accept my praise!! XD)
person Villain
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a fascinating story! Everyone is perfectly in character... that's exactly how a young Kakashi would act. Thanks for this, really. And please, continue!
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Promising start. I am enjoying it. It will be interesting to say the least. I cannot wait for the update.

Thanks for the great read,

Starry
person roely
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it is rare to find someone who has read both novels! I'm glad that i'm not the only one! love the chapter.
person roely
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continued to amaze me!
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so soon. Holy s&%$ 29 hours without sleep, wow. Through the village knows about Kyuubi being inside Naruto at least he has his father. I agree with Kakashi, Yondaime could of just said Kyuubi was gone. I really dig that you quoted the bible in a yaoi story nothing wrong with that in my book at least anyway. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope your well rested. Take care and god bless.
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! So, please update soon! Hopefully as soon as you feel spirited!