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I was looking up naruto information and it said that Arashi was his (not proven but not disproven) name. since Yondaime was Jiraiya student It makes since that Jiraiya would have him contracted to the frog summon. I would use Arashi. Anyway....I like the story. update soon! Je Ne!

Finally got a chance to re-read Chapter 1 and read Chapter 2.

Chapter 1 pushed the story off to a great start, was very touching and at times a little heart-rending. Chapter two was hilarious and heart-warming and as I read I could actually see Yondaime looking into Naruto's eyes as Naruto looked into his...it was a beautiful image thank you for inspiring it.

Loved the fan fic of Naruto stuffing his finger in Kakashi's nose, I laughed out loud when I saw it (the little imp). You did a good job MakoRedEyes and you did a fabulous job writing this fic, Suishou Tenshi.

Oh, before I finish, I also like what you did with Naruto's mother and the backstory you hinted at, and even though the story surrounding her is unfortunate, personally, I don't feel too sad that she's passed on, besides...Kakashi makes a great substitute mother...yes I said it! XD

god is Merciful he shall not smite you for such frivolous things!^_^ at least i don't think so^_^ anywho lovin the story. i was wondering how you were gonna make a kaka/yondy work if you intended on having naruto as his son but i see you've covered that already.