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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the manner in which you've portrayed Naruto, especially his relationship with Kakashi. Hehehehe, already mischievous at such a young age....I love it. For a second I thought he was going to leave Sasuke when he didn't cry. I really do like this fic and will be waiting patiently (not really) for the next chapter. Kudos!! You're freaking awesome, your writings kept me up, woot woot!
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant Chapter!
Can't wait for more. ^_^
Can't wait for more. ^_^
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this chapter!!!!
I love your story!!
Little naruto is so cute! he charms his way in everyone 's heart! Sasuke is fond of him and itachi is just jealous! he shouldn't call naruto a little monster! sasuke won't cry anymore, he is a big boy, he has grown out of it so itachi won't have reasons to hate little naruto!
maybe the little blond could kind a way to itachi's cold heart if he saved sasuke from an attack or something... I don't want the uchiha massacre to happen, shisui and mikoto are so cool!
Yondie has to find a way to show fugaku who is the boss!
Iruka finally showed up!! hmmm... i wonder... is it the start of a yondie/kaka/iru love triangle?
Naruto has to work his magic on iruka too! i wonder if he will be any better in school than he was in the manga... after all now he has precious people to tutor him, he is not alone. Maybe, as the hokage's son, he will be pressured to work and learn faster.
Really your story is one of the best i've ever read!! and i've read LOTS! I just hope you will be able to update more frequently! it's too hard to wait so long between 2 chapters! Good luck for your thesis! real life comes first, i know!
I love your story!!
Little naruto is so cute! he charms his way in everyone 's heart! Sasuke is fond of him and itachi is just jealous! he shouldn't call naruto a little monster! sasuke won't cry anymore, he is a big boy, he has grown out of it so itachi won't have reasons to hate little naruto!
maybe the little blond could kind a way to itachi's cold heart if he saved sasuke from an attack or something... I don't want the uchiha massacre to happen, shisui and mikoto are so cool!
Yondie has to find a way to show fugaku who is the boss!
Iruka finally showed up!! hmmm... i wonder... is it the start of a yondie/kaka/iru love triangle?
Naruto has to work his magic on iruka too! i wonder if he will be any better in school than he was in the manga... after all now he has precious people to tutor him, he is not alone. Maybe, as the hokage's son, he will be pressured to work and learn faster.
Really your story is one of the best i've ever read!! and i've read LOTS! I just hope you will be able to update more frequently! it's too hard to wait so long between 2 chapters! Good luck for your thesis! real life comes first, i know!
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ouch, thesis. hopefully it's not too rough with you
"The fact that he could not answer that question should have been his first sign of warning for the troubles to come."
should i be worried? lol
I loved the "my boy" bit from kikashi. I'm dying to see his relationship develop more with yondaime. i've never actually read them together as a pairing, but i'm really looking forward to what you do with them.
I'm also interested in how you will get the story to move along. definitely looking forward to the next part already
"The fact that he could not answer that question should have been his first sign of warning for the troubles to come."
should i be worried? lol
I loved the "my boy" bit from kikashi. I'm dying to see his relationship develop more with yondaime. i've never actually read them together as a pairing, but i'm really looking forward to what you do with them.
I'm also interested in how you will get the story to move along. definitely looking forward to the next part already
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Keep going!
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was just in time for my birthday, well, the day after anyway ^^’
I kinda have mixed feelings about it, though I still enjoyed myself and sqweed “cute” throughout the whole thing. (Poor Sasuke, Narutos’ so mean D,: )
I hate politics, and I’m not sure how to feel about Konaha’s. On the one had I like it b/c it gives the story some extra dimension, on the other it leaves a bad taste in my mouth :p
Over all I like the chapter, it just seemed to have a slightly dark layer underneath, like impending doom ha-ha…
Till next time ~Passing Reader
I kinda have mixed feelings about it, though I still enjoyed myself and sqweed “cute” throughout the whole thing. (Poor Sasuke, Narutos’ so mean D,: )
I hate politics, and I’m not sure how to feel about Konaha’s. On the one had I like it b/c it gives the story some extra dimension, on the other it leaves a bad taste in my mouth :p
Over all I like the chapter, it just seemed to have a slightly dark layer underneath, like impending doom ha-ha…
Till next time ~Passing Reader
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute!
I belive that was my favorite word through out this whole fic. I find all the characters very endearing, except Itachi, he scares me...
I am curiouse as to whether the Uchiha massacer still takes place or not as the 4th being alive allowes alot of lee-way to what did and can happen in this fic. Still, I look forward to Sasuke and Naruto hitting pouperty lol.
Sorry if anything is misspelt, Its late and I gotta get up early so im not as carful and thoruogh as I usually try to be.
Heres waiting for the next chapter, Until then! ~Passing Reader
I belive that was my favorite word through out this whole fic. I find all the characters very endearing, except Itachi, he scares me...
I am curiouse as to whether the Uchiha massacer still takes place or not as the 4th being alive allowes alot of lee-way to what did and can happen in this fic. Still, I look forward to Sasuke and Naruto hitting pouperty lol.
Sorry if anything is misspelt, Its late and I gotta get up early so im not as carful and thoruogh as I usually try to be.
Heres waiting for the next chapter, Until then! ~Passing Reader
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! A new addiction I have found! *squeals and clutches hands tightly together* I'm soooo loving the say-yet-vastly-different world you have woven together! The story just flows and seems to breath with intrigue and... and... just... Awesomeness that I can't even begin to put into words! I can't wait for a new chapter to be posted *dances*
And the jealousy that flows from Sasuke *snickers* Pure awesomeness! He's such a Naruto-attention whore! xD And good boy Neji! *pats his head* You be all polite and ignore the Uchiha-crybaby! *giggle*
Itachi, don't be mean to our Naru-chan! That's not very nice! Just because your jealous that Sasuke likes him more than you doesn't give you the right to be such a jerk and want him dead! *shakes fist*
Yay! I adored the Gai parts! I hope we get to see more of Gai and Kakashi's rivalry in the future! ^_^
Well, I've taken up to much of your time as it is, so I think I'll end this review and go to sleep since it is 7am and I was last asleep since 2pm yesterday xD LOL! (your story was that addictive ^_^ I couldn't stop reading and I started it, like, 3 or so hours ago!)
And the jealousy that flows from Sasuke *snickers* Pure awesomeness! He's such a Naruto-attention whore! xD And good boy Neji! *pats his head* You be all polite and ignore the Uchiha-crybaby! *giggle*
Itachi, don't be mean to our Naru-chan! That's not very nice! Just because your jealous that Sasuke likes him more than you doesn't give you the right to be such a jerk and want him dead! *shakes fist*
Yay! I adored the Gai parts! I hope we get to see more of Gai and Kakashi's rivalry in the future! ^_^
Well, I've taken up to much of your time as it is, so I think I'll end this review and go to sleep since it is 7am and I was last asleep since 2pm yesterday xD LOL! (your story was that addictive ^_^ I couldn't stop reading and I started it, like, 3 or so hours ago!)
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I get updates of this story, please? my email is: mbiba97@yahoo.com