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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! thought that after perhaps over a year of following this...quite religiously... i should leave a review (slack I know). I love the whole idea of this story and id never considered the kaka/yondy pairing anything interesting.. but the way youve written it, im loving how its going! Hope you keep it up and look forward to the next chap!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story...it's amazing. Absolutely amazing.
First of all I love that you're starting it off when they were kids, just to give a bit of a back story. The Yondaime, Kakashi and Naruto family is so positively cute. Don't even get me started on Naruto and Sasuke. Adorable, enough said. I can just tell this story will have so much interesting plot. It will be totally epic. Can not wait to see what happens next.
Oh yes, good luck on finals!!
First of all I love that you're starting it off when they were kids, just to give a bit of a back story. The Yondaime, Kakashi and Naruto family is so positively cute. Don't even get me started on Naruto and Sasuke. Adorable, enough said. I can just tell this story will have so much interesting plot. It will be totally epic. Can not wait to see what happens next.
Oh yes, good luck on finals!!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot! For the semeXuke order...
NARUxSasu ( Love, love, love that pairing. Naruto-seme is my ultimate favourite and possesive,snooty uke Sasuke makes my world.)
YondaimexKaka
NARUxSasu ( Love, love, love that pairing. Naruto-seme is my ultimate favourite and possesive,snooty uke Sasuke makes my world.)
YondaimexKaka
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated! I'm so happy you won't believe. Loved every word :)
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December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You don't need luck, you'll rock your finals no matter what! Just finished mine, and so glad because it gave me time to read your fricken awesome update! I love this story. I check on it every week to see if you've updated and I'm so happy you have. I love your Sasuke in this, hes just so... Sasuke, if he was never traumatised. I hope you enjoy your break and I can't wait to see where you take this. I'll follow it 'til the end.
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read the last chap so i don't know what you wrote about... but to answer ur question i have to go with Kakashi been the uke and Minato the seme and sasuke the seme and naruto the uke... the roles just fit their personalities.... anyways off to read the last chap... plz update soon... i love this story... i'll continue the this review in the last chap... cya
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey awesome story... I love it... even though there is only feelings insinuated between yondaime and kakashi... i'm ok with that... i know later on it will be worth the wait... plz do continue... seeing sasuke as a little cry baby its amuzing... but seeing him grow tot he sasuke we all know is also interesting... I did missed kakashi and the yondaime... plz focus on them more... pretty plz....
anyways, keep up the good writing that makes me feel like i'm not actually reading, but rather watching in a way and I like that... so keep updating and I'll keep reading...
cya
anyways, keep up the good writing that makes me feel like i'm not actually reading, but rather watching in a way and I like that... so keep updating and I'll keep reading...
cya
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I does enjoy this fic quite a bit~!
As for pairings? Yon would probably be seme. I can't see it any other way. As for Naruto? ...seme XD. I'm, personally, in love with NaruSasu (because possessive/angry/snippy ukes? Yees moar). Plus it's not as commonly seen, sadly. Plus, in my opinion, it fits their personalities. But really, it's up to you I think. No matter what you pick, people will still read it cause it's good :).
As for pairings? Yon would probably be seme. I can't see it any other way. As for Naruto? ...seme XD. I'm, personally, in love with NaruSasu (because possessive/angry/snippy ukes? Yees moar). Plus it's not as commonly seen, sadly. Plus, in my opinion, it fits their personalities. But really, it's up to you I think. No matter what you pick, people will still read it cause it's good :).
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah for update!
it's weird, i saw this new fanpic of Yondaime/Kakashi and just thought i'd re-read this, and when i get here there's an update!!
i keep up to date on the manga myself (a lot more then i do with the anime), and i'm curious about what your waiting for in the manga, and why you'd abandon the story after seeing (or not seeing) whatever it is.
ANYWAY, concerning the update, all the kids are so cute! i hope sasuke doesn't get a complex hehehe. he's way too young for one of those, but he's well and truly on his way to a few of them.
i also got to the end of the chapter and was sad to see no Yondaime/Kakashi scene to follow up the end of the last chapter. i love reading their scenes in you story, and do hope that you'll continue this so i can see more of those moments.
till next time *wave*
it's weird, i saw this new fanpic of Yondaime/Kakashi and just thought i'd re-read this, and when i get here there's an update!!
i keep up to date on the manga myself (a lot more then i do with the anime), and i'm curious about what your waiting for in the manga, and why you'd abandon the story after seeing (or not seeing) whatever it is.
ANYWAY, concerning the update, all the kids are so cute! i hope sasuke doesn't get a complex hehehe. he's way too young for one of those, but he's well and truly on his way to a few of them.
i also got to the end of the chapter and was sad to see no Yondaime/Kakashi scene to follow up the end of the last chapter. i love reading their scenes in you story, and do hope that you'll continue this so i can see more of those moments.
till next time *wave*
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you've updated this! I really love this fic, especially because of your great writing style.
The way you portray Itachi is very interesting. We know that Itachi killed his family for his love of Sasuke and Konoha since the Uchihas wanted to use Naruto to gain power. Even though Sasuke clearly loves Naruto, Mikoto says that it's only for favor from the Hokage and Fugaku goes along with his wife. Will that spin out of control and make the Uchihas in your fic want more power and status in the village?
Over-protectiveness of Sasuke mixed with hate of Kyuubi-container Naruto sets up the potential conditions for Itachi leaving the village. Will that happen here?
I love all the interactions between little Sasuke and Neji. I can't wait for the rest of the gang to appear in the next chapter!
Great job! Keep going!
The way you portray Itachi is very interesting. We know that Itachi killed his family for his love of Sasuke and Konoha since the Uchihas wanted to use Naruto to gain power. Even though Sasuke clearly loves Naruto, Mikoto says that it's only for favor from the Hokage and Fugaku goes along with his wife. Will that spin out of control and make the Uchihas in your fic want more power and status in the village?
Over-protectiveness of Sasuke mixed with hate of Kyuubi-container Naruto sets up the potential conditions for Itachi leaving the village. Will that happen here?
I love all the interactions between little Sasuke and Neji. I can't wait for the rest of the gang to appear in the next chapter!
Great job! Keep going!