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for The World Was All Before Him

by SuishouTenshi

person Luna_Meow
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... new chapter. You have no idea how long did I wait for this. :D

LOL @ Naruto learning new words from Icha Icha novel. XD And LOL @ Kakashi's "confession" (It made me scream out "Kitaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~!!" silently XD).

Keep up the good work! :D
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely adored the update! i couldn't believe you had updated when i first saw it *giant cheesy grin*

hehe i love kakashi and minato in this! since the first chap i've been able to see the chemistry, and it's just getting better and better :D i love it, and the next chapter will be a great chapter for these 2, i can just feel it

see you next time
person Reyn
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*flails*
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God I like your Naru-chan and Minato. Even crybaby Sasuke is a delight. And I absolutely adore your Kakashi, its been a while since anyone that I have seen has written him... dare I say it so beautifully. I love his characterization here, especially when he goes into "mama Kakashi mode." I hope you don't have plans to kill off Minato, that would be a shame because they really do make a wonderful pairing. Anyway great story I look forward to the next chapter.
person animelover
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry i can't remember if i've reviewed this before. sigh ... but i really like this fic. i dont' think i've ever read a minato/kakashi pairing before. the dynamics between them are rather interesting, and i love the fact that sasu is such a crybaby. hahahaha, can't wait to see what happens when they're older. no wonder itachi's so disgusted with him.
person Outlaw Angel
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo cuute, but will Yondaime actually listen to Naru-chan, and not marry
any of those "perfect women" and go after what his heart desire, the copy-ninja Kakashi?
I can see it now, Naruto calling Kakashi "Mama-kashi" aaah, cute!!
And what about the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke? hope we get something lemony!! Make Sasuke the uke, cuz in these chappies
he was sooo totaly a born uke, bwabwabwa (evil laugh) And please, please make a cool ending!! With Yondaime marrying Kakashi of course!!

Love where ur heading with story, make it a like ur one ur super best!!
Update as soon as you can!
person dana
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as always i am stoked when i see an update of this story and today was no exception. i loved so many little funny thungs in this chapter that i am hard pressed to pick one but if i have to i would have to say making naruto have kakashi say that he liked minato was atthe top. i cannot wait to see how neiji and naruto's first meeting goes cause i know he just has to go to hinata's birthday party. plus the since naruto is going then i know that sasuke will also be there. hopefully the fur won't fly. i can't wait for the next update.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shakes Minato* KISS HIM YA IDIOT!!! Oh dear gods, I couldn't stop laughing at the scene about the boobies and whatnot. Naruto does need to learn not to laugh at Sasuke though. Silly boy! I'm glad to see an update on this!
person lost_love_xXx
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon, yes? good. lol

can't wait ot read more!

xo
person Luna_Meow
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoops, my guess is wrong! XD But great chapter! :D

For the new chapter, I like either Iruka or Gai's.