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Oh, and by the way, my vote is for Gai. Especially if Yondaime has, until that point, not been witness to Gai and Kakashi being in the same room. Embarrassed!Kakashi is for the win.

Being a lover of 'what if' fics, especially those in which the Yondaime survives, I was very (read extremely) to find 'The World Was All Before Him'. So far I am greatly enjoying it, and I hope that you update soon. I also hope that Kakashi will catch a clue, or that Minato will make a move! I love the decriptions of baby-Naruto; Kakashi's descriptions are so deadpan-hilarious and long-suffering at turns, and that Yondaime named Naruto when he was, in essence, delirious and then freaked out at the name when he woke up made me laugh out loud.
Your newest avid reader.

i really love this story. i read it and then went back and read it again.

you are a great writer. the story and each character have their own life that shows through your writing, the momentum of the piece is excellently paced, and baby naruto and sasuke are just plain cute! i don't know if you realise just how often babies in stories now no real character, so i'm delighted to read baby naruto and sasuke! SO CUTE

i love the interactions between kakashi and yondaime. i've never really read a story with them as a couple, and while they are not there yet and i don't even know if it will develop to that stage..... i really hope that they will. the development, and attraction, and just plain tension between the 2 is amasing! when yondaime said in A3SC2 --------------- “Don’t,” Yondaime imparted his order softly, “don’t ever show your face to someone else.” --------------- i had such a yaoi girl moment, and i'm honestly not prone to those at all! i simply love that line, and i am really anticipating more of that in the future from these 2

in closing, really really liked it. and i hope that this story is continued with similar, if not better, moments in the future.

god! might have to read it one more time ;)


I also read:
Wind Rider - i really liked this one 2, and had to track you account down on fanfiction.net because i simply could not read anything else till i had read all the parts that were submitted.
A Mark of You and Me - which was so very sad! i loved the story, but the ending was quite sad. I'm definitely glad that i read "The World Was All Before Him" after it. make me so much happier
Cage - loved it. it's not often we get to see a darker, mischievous side of harry thats still true to his original character. he's either dark and a bit evil or just OOC, so amazing job with that one

First of all, kudos for this, it is great! When Naru-chan called Kakashi 'mama' I just about lost it; for some reason that just had me bawling! As for who to hear about in the next chapter....I'm going to have to go with Iruka. I just love him to pieces!

Update! Please!!! Besides my fav. part is "mama-kashi"

Hey, this is kinda cool and unique! What life would be like in the 4th H had lived. Neat! I'm only on about 2nd chapt, so I don't have much to say yet, but I like his personality. You've captured it well.

Later! ;-)

Great chapter. It's funny how somethings I feel like Kakashi is older than the Yondaime.
Thanks for the update.

... I DEMAND MOAR!!!!!

Christ, this is like the only good still-alive yondaime fic I've ever read (sorry to all of the other people that wrote yondaime fics). And it's long! Yay!!!!

calling kakashi mama was so funny and appropriate. i knew when i saw the story editing yesterday that it msut mean another great chapter was soon to be up and i was not mistaken (thanks). i like how you are slowly building the relationship between the fourth and kakashi it's sweet. as for the poll i choose gai because imaging him trying to handle a energetic naruto and then tiring him out is hilarious. since you didn't kill off the fourth is neiji's father still going to be alive or are you still going to kill him off. wouldn't this effect whether neiji is a hardass or not. if gaara meet naruto when he was younger before his uncle tried to kill him wouldn't he still have a little bit of different attitude since his uncle is still alive and he has someone whom he trusts. i can't wait to see the next chapter.

I vote for Iruka! ^^ There aren't enough fics about the man out there. Basically, I just like reading about Iruka. ^^

Okay, so yeah, my guesses as to what Naruto's first word might be were a bit weird. I would've never guessed you would choose something so normal though.. At least it was in a weird situation. ^^;;; *giggles*