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for Crimson and Clovers

by TheSirens

person seraphym
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do love it! I haven't read anything this creative in so long! I can't wait to read more. Your characters work really well in the context of the story you have them in, great job! The battle in the next chapter is going to be sucha good read. I look forward to it, update soon!
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No one reviewed yet?! That's insane! I love this story!!!! Keep going please! The girl is sooo cute... I want to see what happens next! I'm dying here!
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much ^__^ I'm looking forwards to the development between Sasuke and Naruto *squee* and how cute 'lil Ren will fit into it (Can Naruto be her daddy too? *sniff* XD;;) The moon's to do with the Tsukiyomi, right?

More, asap, please! hehe ^^
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I´m absolutely poor at giving (proper) reviews, so I´ll just tell you, that "I really love your story!"
I like the plot and it´s well written.

Have to admit, I don´t know what the red moon and the fox stand for... or is it Sasuke and Naruto and she´ll be between them? Kind of standing in the way? ...hrm...

Anyway. Can´t wait for the next chapter! Please update soon.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Naruto/Kyuubi have to fight the girl/five-tails! Sasuke still cares about Naruto but he has a daughter to protect. I don't think Kyuubi wants to hurt the five-tails though.