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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was crazy GREAT! I loved this one. You really are a great writer. All of your oneshots, so far, have been very well done. Can't wait for the next chapter. =)
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well.... I love your smut!!!!
I don't care that there is no 20 chapter story i just read it for a couple of pages of smut pure man smut.
I really like that one but i thought you where going to do vampires next?
Is that still in the works or was it scraped?
-HallowsEve
I don't care that there is no 20 chapter story i just read it for a couple of pages of smut pure man smut.
I really like that one but i thought you where going to do vampires next?
Is that still in the works or was it scraped?
-HallowsEve
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this series! It makes my perv-y heart flutter, thank you for writing it! Only problem so far- there was a "thru" instead of "through" in the 11th chapter- which makes me wince. I hate "thru" and "u" in the middle of a well written fic, but I'm sure this was an oversight- it's one of those words your mind automatically corrects when you proofread if you're used to seeing it. Other than that, a gem. Keep up the great work!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was HOT!
And Itachi was Uke! Most of the time I can only see him as Seme, but this was good. Yummy!XD
Well, I hope you get lots of reviews and update soon!
And vampires you say...oh, I can't wait! ^^
And Itachi was Uke! Most of the time I can only see him as Seme, but this was good. Yummy!XD
Well, I hope you get lots of reviews and update soon!
And vampires you say...oh, I can't wait! ^^
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very cool. I not a big fan for Naruto as seme but, this one wasn't bad at all. Great job. Can't wait for the next one. =)
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heavens, this is the best of you so far, no doubt! :D damn HAWT!!!!!!!!!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Smut is always good. I would like to take this oppertunity too congratulate you on something else though.
You have a wonderful gift for making a wide variaty of genre's, situations and topics come alive. You fill them with detail leaving the reader feeling an intimate connection too and absorbed by the scene. This is rare and very enjoyable. I don't know if these topics are your own interest or the results of great research, either way, it works. Thank you.
You have a wonderful gift for making a wide variaty of genre's, situations and topics come alive. You fill them with detail leaving the reader feeling an intimate connection too and absorbed by the scene. This is rare and very enjoyable. I don't know if these topics are your own interest or the results of great research, either way, it works. Thank you.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was awesome and sinfully delicious. Thanks again.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like these one-shot so much. They are so good to read I Can not wait until the next one.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, I should really have commented on each chapter as I read it but that would have required me to *stop reading* which you can clearly see would be impossible. This is the best, not to mention hottest, collection of fics that I've read in ages and having it feature one of my favorite pairings just makes it all the sweeter. Thank you, thank you. (You can tell that I'm serious because I went and looked up my sign in information just so that I could comment - normally if a story doesn't accept anonymous reviews I give up and move on rather than braving my awful filing system. ;)