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for You Belong to Me. Always.

by DismalAbstract

person schrient
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi!
your stories are very nice. there were only a few of itanaru stories out there and i was worried that i might have already read every single one of them ... LoL... i saw and read your stories months ago but this is the first time i'm writing a review about it. i'd just like to let you know those were very nice pieces of stories. although you were off with some of the verb tenses and grammatical connections but still, the thought is there. teehee... and don't worry, those errors were pretty undetectable, its just that i was trained to notice such things back in school due to my major. =D anyhoo, keep it up! i'll be waiting for your next entry!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, hot hot. Look forward to the next chapter. I off to voting. Take care and god bless.
person Hen
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I would love to see pictures from that last scene.

As always, your story is hot! You've got a nice balance going between Naruto and Itachi, where neither seems to be too submissive or too dominant, respectively. I hope you keep writing for us!
person Blood Stained Butterfly
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I totally loved this one. Asking what sex and whore was. That just killed me. I love how Naru turned out in the end. Great chapter. Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next one. Vampires. yay.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thats was great, not your best work but still great.
person akume
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice storyline. I can't wait for the next one though. Until then.
person Sancta
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter, even though you lapsed through somethings, it was very nice and well written. I truly do think you are the only Ita/Naru writer that I can stand reading. Oh and as a request - have you ever thought of them going against each other in a racing event :winks:
person VRon8899
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAY! I've been waiting for another chap...Awesome as USUAL!!! XDD I can't wait for the next vamp story!! **love**
person gaara89
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I liked all of the chapters so far. Are you planning to continue?
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last chap was hawt! There's always been something about a young Naruto with Itachi that's practically titillating. Nice job.