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I think you should continue this into Fateful Nights. I agree that after what Neji-kun went through, I think he would be reluctant to have sex. Six months at least...

I truly enjoyed reading this...Neji/Shika are my fav couple!

Hrm... *thinking hard*

I'd go with ending it without lemon and make that Fateful Nights sequel ^_^ The only alternative I can offer is maybe you can tell the story of how the one year went by before ending it with a lemon? You can write them in one or two (or more) chapters, or just a chapter of mini-scenes that shows timejump (like what I did in UR chapters 3 and 9). Everything is up to you though. I mean, it's your story and when it comes to fanfictions, I think, you can write pretty much anything you want, right?

Anyway, good luck and I look forward to see how it turns out ^_^

Really awesome chapter!
My oh my, I hope Neji doesn't die.
Shikamaru just admitted he loved him, after all. xD

Hmm, as much as I love lemons, I think you should write the lemon to the Fateful Nights.
The title sounds so good. xD
I don't know why, but the time jumps can be quite troublesome and all.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

Leave out the lemon if you don't feel comfortable with it being there. It's best not to compromise the feelings of the characters in the story.

Of course, you'll have to write the continuation with the lemon; we still need our citrus, after all.

I say: Don't force things just to put lemon into the story. It's a great story, and is great even without lemon- although I love your lemon. I agree that Neji would need time to recover from his tragedy, with Shikamaru's love and support- I personally would love to read a bit about that story too but understand that may be off the table.

Then again, once he has physically healed, depending on the mood you have set- etc., is is possible to bring lemon into the story. Neji may be drawn to Shikamaru in a sexual way as a source of comfort- a way to wash away the bad memories and replace them with good. Or maybe he would need to be semi for a while to regain a feeling of control and then later be uke to relearn that it's okay- sometimes even great- to be out of control.

Really I think it all depends on how the story is flowing out of you. :) Just don't forget that you are a great writer and we love your story so you should trust your muse and your judgement.

while i would love a lemon, i think your right neji would definetly not be ready. Especially if you're trying to keep it realistic, and i personally don't object to a continuation.

I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update please!!!

so far it's really good.

GOD!!!!! you have to update soon!!!! i love the way this is turning out. cant wait for the chapter with yummy smex in it.