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Sorry, I just wanted to add thank you for the warning ahead of time. It always annoys me when an author refuses to say which way a pairing will go because in their eyes it doesn't matter. It's nice to know before you get caught up in a story and end up disappointed/upset because it ends up going against a preference.

ItachixIruka is a rare pair; I like how you're working this.
Can't wait for the next update.

nice. this has a promising start to it and it continues on. i'm curious about how this will play out. i feel bad for iruka and sincerely hope that things turn out better for him. now that sasuke has his naruto, how will they play out together? obviously there's attraction, but is sasuke going to try to get naruto to do those kinds of things with him or is he going to practice a bit more discretion and allow naruto to come at him in his own time? ah such questions. nice, very nice. i'm looking forward to more, eagerly. i really can't wait to see how you play out the dynamics in the relationship between naruto and sasuke. and though i prefer naru-seme, i can't wait to read how you play out the sasu-seme. i have high hopes!

keep up the great work!
~hanyou-elf

Thankies.. hope I didn't cause too much blood loss for you!!.. XD

You're still doing a great job!...^^.. I'm curious to see how things go between Naruto and Sasuke.. though I'm thinking the real reason Kisame put the tracking nod in Naruto was because of Orochi... though Orochi wouldn't know about it... XD

offer stands.. didn't know it would hide my email though.. ladywolf_5@yahoo.com

update soon please xD

Well it's very good for a first story and it looks like it definately will be interesting.I can't wait to read more and find out what will happen.By the way about the occ-ness thingie,don't worry if the characters are occ(as long as they are not too occ)Also about the beta I could help you if you haven't found one yet.Just contact me.Here's my email vivpiv@yahoo.co.uk Oh and if it won't be too troublesome,will you read my story,please?

please contine i really like where this is going.

i looks good....keep going...i really want to read more :)

Well done! I'm hooked. Now, can you keep it up? Hope so! Post soon.

wow. this is definitely an interesting start to what promises to be an interesting story. i'm looking forward to more from you for this. i'm curious to see how the whole ita/iru will play out and can't believe it's going to be naru/sasu. *naru-seme for life!* an interesting story with an interesting plot going as well. please, update soon and keep the great work up!

ja!
~hanyou-elf