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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is an awesome fic. Ur method of writing, and descriptions just take my breath away. There is just one insignificant issue i have with it and that is I cant see Itachi doing those things to sasuke, I mean i like uchihacest and all but he just seems too 'indecent' that I think him capable of..... but thats ok, a fic is a fic lol
Wow so Naruto and Sasuke finally got together lol. They are so cute and perfect for one another. I really like how you brough about their relationship and developed it. Your portrayal of Sakura is just perfect. I like spitfire Sakura, who is strong in almost every sense. The only think I am wishing for at this point is Itasaku lol, maybe he can turn around a new leaf.... maybe?? lol
But in nay case, this fic is nothing short of amazing. You are a wonderful authoress and I hope u continue the excellent work!! cant wait to read more ^_^
Wow so Naruto and Sasuke finally got together lol. They are so cute and perfect for one another. I really like how you brough about their relationship and developed it. Your portrayal of Sakura is just perfect. I like spitfire Sakura, who is strong in almost every sense. The only think I am wishing for at this point is Itasaku lol, maybe he can turn around a new leaf.... maybe?? lol
But in nay case, this fic is nothing short of amazing. You are a wonderful authoress and I hope u continue the excellent work!! cant wait to read more ^_^
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I can't give my name or real email here. Just three more months until I'm 18. I just wanted to say that this story is really well done. It's got an interesting and original plot to it, with very few grammar and/or spelling errors. I love that you took the time to research all the Japanese terminology and culture. I don't usually like yaoi very much, at least not NaruSasu, but for some reason it's ok if it's with Sakura also (they ARE going to get Sakura in on the action, I'm assuming, since they're "three parts of the same whole"). It just seems more plausible if the three of them are joined like that, because they are such a close team. I definitely don't like ItaSasu incest, but since Itachi is clearly the bad guy here, I can handle it. I just hope that whenever he tries to do something to Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto will be there to save the day. I really look foward to more of this story. It's so well done and so well written and has smut AND plot! It would be a real shame if you didn't finish this. I can see there is some serious plot development in the future.
Much love.
Much love.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this story kicks ass i love the way u write it is very beautiful...what will happen to sakura you have to update please please please