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for Peaceful Waters

by Jayderaven

person puppydog
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! I love the comment you made about being a perv! I LOVE YOU FOR THAT!!!! The story was great so please continue to create more chapters!
person LadyApollonia
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was hot. This is definitely one of my favorite fics.
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is my favorite story!!! I think i can recite every line by memory i've read it so much. Please update!!!
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that my dreams are filled with Genma I really need more!!!!
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice I sat down and read all your chappies! I love it finally they had sex and oddly enough I don't mind Sakura being with Sai too! We all know he needs it hehe well can't wait for more update soon!

Loves Arry
Ps. I was wondering if you could or should I say comfortable with doing PEG I usually dislike reading PEG cos the characters of other authours use or the way they make them act and then throw in some PEG (usually thinking it makes them hardcore)just doesn't work.

But with the way you make Genma's personality and him being Bi I was thinking about it and liked the idea of Sakura using some jutsu or another to clone 'Big Daddy' connect it with a pair of panties and do Genma up the ass! The way you have him sounds like he never was UKE with Kakashi and it sounded like he wouldn't mind so why not have Sakura give him his wish hehehe! Yes I can be very pervy but I think it would work in your story and that you'd make it actually hot! Just a Idea/request for you to think about either way great job and keep it up!
person Erizawa
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just... too amazing. Thank you ^_^ As always I implore you to keep this up and write more wonderful Genma love! Thank you...
person Ladylara
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, man I wish I that was me in sakura's place. Yum... that was excellent.
person MrsCake
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow all that happened in just one hour and he can go for more? Damn! Genma is ultra smexy for an old dog! :-)
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'ten pages of nothing but lemon O_o'. I’m so pervy'

lmao, what does that say for the rest of us?


xD This was just what I needed, especially after reading Carry on my Wayward Son. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK I can't tell you how glad I was when I got home last night and found an update!!!! I can't get enough of this story!! Thank-you!!!! I only hope that more updates will follow and soon I know that is asking alot but like I said I can't get enough!!!