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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. Gosh those guys are sure protective of our little Sakura.
Rox
Rox
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved this chapter. It was so funny and enlightening! Kakashi and Genma. Who'd uh thunk? LMAO! I love it. Im glad you came up with a plot so this will continue. I cant wait to see what happens next. I totally understand about other stories and such. I currently have three going all at once so updates are are a bit slow. And Im planning to start a new one on top of those. I cant help it. I get an idea it must be written!
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hah-hah-ha! Oh, my that was funny. Thanks.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG... hilarious chapter! I'm all giddy here...
Thank you so much for updating! You rock!
Thank you so much for updating! You rock!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome awesome......It’s like a little jack-off kit....that was funny...update soon...keep up the great work
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like to say that I have enjoyed your stroy thus far and I hope that you update soon. As for your request for a beta, I would be more than happy to do it for you. I am a featured writer on this site. Feel free to check out my works and profile. I am currently in the process of moving to Japan with my husband in the next few weeks so I have a lot of free time. I should be able to help with corrections at any time you need. After our move I am going to be really free, at least for the summer anyway. Let me know if I can be of any help to you; contact me by e-mail if you do.
Arcangel3012
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Genma is probably one of my favorite characters. I can't wait for more!
Oh, and I loved this line: "“That must be a requirement for a girl to go into ANBU, be able to resist jumping your teammates in the middle of a mission,” Sakura mused playing with the faucet with her toe." I cannot agree more. I KNOW that I would jump a man in an ANBU uniform any day of the week. Good thing I don't live in the Naruto universe...no one would be safe!
Oh, and I loved this line: "“That must be a requirement for a girl to go into ANBU, be able to resist jumping your teammates in the middle of a mission,” Sakura mused playing with the faucet with her toe." I cannot agree more. I KNOW that I would jump a man in an ANBU uniform any day of the week. Good thing I don't live in the Naruto universe...no one would be safe!
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want some Big Daddy too
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL I feel the same way. Writing about sex is different en easier some how. But most people masturbate so why does it still feel dirty? LMAO! If I was left alone in a place with a naked Genma attacking my senses I wouldnt be in the bathtub!!! Screw the rude Sasuke and emotionless Sai! Let them watch and maybe they wouldnt open their big fat mouths anymore!!! OMG!!! What about Kakashi you ask....make it a threesome...cant leave out Kakashi no matter how sexy Genma is with his 'Big Daddy'! OMG! my mind is so in the gutter with this one. Loved the chappy, especially the nightmare. I understand Sakura's lack of confidence in herself. I have the same problem. But my problem is I do look as bad as I think....*sigh*