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for Peaceful Waters

by Jayderaven

schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sos o great, love the new chapter. Of course the charcters are OOC but if naruto would ever go in this direction, lol, I am sure you would be right on!
person Kaysan
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heck, I'll be your beta! I also beta for someone over on fanfiction.net and I have written a few stories over there. It's been a while since an update, but with my new Naruto obsession who knows what could happen. Anyway, let me know! Love the story so far! Hugs & Kisses!
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far I absolutley love this fic, and if you need a beta let me know. Even though I have never written a story or beta'd before I am and English major. So if you need any help I can do it!
person Anon
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAA I really like this!!!! the begining is a little confuzing but it seemed like she was going through a mental breakdown.
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, lol, great stuffs so far. Congrats on breaking the oneshot funk though, keep up with this it's really good.
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was awesome! I'm still slaughing, Big Daddy - Holy Cow! Only Genma would get a tatoo there with that saying - seriously! I'm also happy that Sasuke-jerk and Sai-ass were affected by Naked Sakura - serves them right for dissin' on her!! Please update soon!!
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GOD that was funny!
I want him to wake up to her checking him and her saying to him good morning big daddy with everyone there!
Now That Would Be Funny!!
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BIG DADDY!!! Love it. I so love Genma. He's so sexy. And kudo's to Sakura for maintaining....well just maintaining anything including dignity under the stress of being naked and then being with a naked Genma with a wood the size of a Giant Sequoia. LMAO!
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank God it's not a one-shot. This is going to be so much FUN!!!!

Don't let Sasuke end up with Sakura, he doesn't deserve her.
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! I absolutely loved it. Nice tattoo...

Thanks!