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for Peaceful Waters

by Jayderaven

person Erizawa
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow!! It is late evening here and I have spent pretty much all day reading this story, every single chapter! I LOVE it. Totally love it! I agree, Genman is severely under used in the anime and Sasuke is a whiney bitch. Genma kissing him was hilarious btw ^_^. And Sai was so adorable when Sakura kissed him, he so needs more hugs. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please please update soon. xxx/.
person Erizawa
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BTW.... do you still need a BETA? MSN me if you do ^_^
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, intense, Genma may be a daddy, oooooh.
person Ladylara
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really funny. I loved that little speech that Genma had with Sasuke. Cant wait for more.
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Short, almost too short, but very sweet. I like Genma in this story. I like the combination of kick your ass and lets fool around split personality thing he has going on. And I love that he puts Sasuke in his place so easily. LOL
person MrsCake
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh YES! Nothing like blackmail to get your motor running! Go Genma! Go Genma!
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he's not sai's father?! noooooo but yay? im so confused and i love it!>_<
person bakita11
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Genma is a FATHER? WOo Great Chapter!!!
person roxnroll
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job. can't wait til next week.
Rox
person bakita11
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I thought you said they don't come any bigger than yours! HAha , great chapter! Please update soon!