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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahah, you had me cracking up with sai and sakura, quite hilarious. can't wait for the hotspring action, oohh, the anticipation! continue soon!
-hasu86
-hasu86
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I like the story building here. Poor wittle Sai. He's just so darn cute. Looks like Sasuke and Kakashi are a little jealous. I love the quick updates too.
Rox
Rox
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the scene with Sai. He does need lovin. And apparently so does Genma from what I read so far. Look forward to more action. LOL
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really deep. Nice.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you know what Im going to say....AWESOME! ANOTHER FAnTASTIC CHAPTER! Cant wait for more. I loved the end of this one. It showed a side of Genma most writers dont ever touch on. A side I think his character deserves.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy crap genma a father i didn't see that happening....how did that happen...well i know how it happened but when? did he kill his own son?
fyi sakura if even sai can say you look hot then you shouldn't worry about sasuke and what he thinks since sai the most emotionally retarded person
fyi sakura if even sai can say you look hot then you shouldn't worry about sasuke and what he thinks since sai the most emotionally retarded person
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhh Very nice and hot I love it!!!!!!!
The end was a little depressing but I Realy want the lemon soon!!!!
The end was a little depressing but I Realy want the lemon soon!!!!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I'm starting to figure out the whole "Big Daddy" thing. I love that you updated so quickly. I hope the next one comes out soon.
Rox
Rox
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww i think Sai is genma's son which would be weird since his son is like sakura's age and he wants in her pants. Go sakura!!! lol keep up the good work i really love the humor and the drama.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not cool!!! You left me hanging!!! So what happens next? HURRY!!!! I like where this seems to be going. Go Genma!!! I am so tired of having him depicted as GAY. He so isn't!!!