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for Peaceful Waters

by Jayderaven

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BOO! on you for leaving it like that, LOL!!! This has been really interesting; I wouldn't have thought Genma/Sakura but hey- I like reading about different possibilites. Totally looking forward to the next installment. The characters are very well done IMO and believable, and it's written nicely too!
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol kakashi and gemna did it!! O_O i love this story it cant stop smiling. yay smut with a plot!!!
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! Update fast! update soon! update now!!! plsss
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO and it took so long for the new chapter too!!!!!! Please please give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not one of your longer chapters and it ended abruptly.....*sigh*....BUT...I loved it! I love the idea that Sakura wasnt playing hard to get. LOL She better drag Genma into his room and have her way with him for all of us Genma fans who would love to do just that! Leave Naruto and them just gawking at them as they wave happily before the door closes!!!! LMAO!
person Zelha
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I can totally see Sasuke flipping about seeing that scene XD

BTW you got that chapter as #7, but the last one is number 5... :P
person hasu86
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh, now that was just evil, damn evil i say! enjoyed it very much though, and the cheesy pick up line was classic, lol, can't wait to read more so continue soon!
-hasu86
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a way to end the chapater update soon please can't wait for more.
person roxnroll
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay-That was priceless. I can't wait to find out their reaction. Can't wait for the update-hopefully soon?
Rox
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! I know you are busy but hurry!!!