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for Zero Hour!

by Amarukoira

person Dancing Fox
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so good! wow...Itachi is crazy, but i'm glad Neji and Gaara almost or maybe got back together ^^
and and they found Haku and everything thats good too, wow i love reading this! *side note* if neji and gaara ever had a song
i'm sure it would be by the Beatles - you really got a hold on me *yup* i really cant wait to see what happens in the end...
well i can if that means me reading more ^^ well anyway....IT ROCKS!!!
person Dancing Fox
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this last chaper was the crazest ever!! wow who knew Itachi would be the one...*thinks a bit* ... i wouldnt have guessed
that, too bad haku had to die or is he dead?! but yeah, i think thats kinda cute how Itachi loves Niji, but he's kinda insane
but oh well we could all tell he was since he's just like that, and i thought it was really cute how Gaara and Niji had there little moment and he told him that he still loved him, this is really getting interesting to read. It reaaly is
wow i cant believe how much i enjoy reading this, YEAh i cant wait for more
person Pelle
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I SOOO LUVV This Story ^-^
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You killed off Haku!...And Orochimaru. Gah! Haku! I sort of feel bad for Itachi though. Feel better soon Nik!
person cirquegirl999
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I know ,terrible of me to take so long to review, life has just been so hectic lately (mom just found out she might have heart problems, so I'm in charge of cheering her up). Anyway, back to reviewing, I'm going to do one for each chapter like before. Well, this was certainly a good way to tie up the issue about the haunting dreams Neji's been having. I love the fact that the symbolism always comes back to his heart and Gaara guiding him through it. The 'prophetic' part was well put as well, poor Neji, seeing what he can have and thinking he can stay there without doing the work, the sap!lol I certainly hope the other readers go through this side story (though it's not really one is it?) b/c their going to be clueless as to his change of attitude. Good job on the chapter, now off the chapter 13! Yay!lol ^_^
person cirquegirl999
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there....Mathis? lol, I'm just going to pretend it's Nik that I'm reviewing and she'll look over the reviews when she gets better. NIK! How could you kill Haku! I don't mind Oro, he was an ass but Haku? Really? After all the talking about possibly him and Gaara and then talking about Zabuza being his knight in shining armor and you just go and off him, WTF? Oh gosh I shouldn't be writing a review so soon after reading this, it means that there'll be more emotions and less analyzing. I mean you even managed to kill my buzz over guessing right for Mr. X (fucking Itachi, I'll kill the bastard, no one kills Haku w/out becoming a eunich, I'd like to see how he'd satisfy Neji after that!). Finally everything is coming together though, and it's good to see you're going back to the real Naruto world (with Itachi being a pyscho and all). You did well on describing how Itachi came to his reasoning, I don't like it but I'll stand by it. Just promise me one thing, I get him afterwards and then return him to you....in pieces. I want to punch Naru/Sasu/Gaara simply b/c they didn't go to see what was in the warehouse. This is me praying that you haven't offed Haku and he's stuck in the storage room like Sasuke (I think it was him) said. Ane! You threw me for a loop on this one, and not in a good way!!!!!lol Hope you get better, remember to get plenty of rest and fluids (which means you shouldn't be reading this review until AFTER you're better!).
person Dancing Fox
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY, it was so cute omg awe i Cant believe how cute that was, oh niji and gaara are such the cutest couple and it goes
so nice and everything the way your writing it and OMG i cant stop thinking how cute and lovely the chapter
was i really really love reading every chaper you write! YAY high five! this is my favorite storie i love reading about
niji and gaara, i mean its sad at some parts and yet kinda everything is working out ^^ MORE!!! there needs to be more!
lol....i love it
person Pen
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...AW COME ON GIVE ME SOMETHING MORE SOLID THAN THAT!!!! And I know, Kingdom Heart 1 & 2 are friggin addicting. Nik-nii-san.....PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! I MUST SEE HOW GAARA AND NEJI DO!!!!! Oh I can smell boy smex from here...WILL THEREBE BOY SMEX SOON?!?! *jumps up and down like a 3 year old*

Kat
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Neji is finally coming to his senses. How can you not love Gaara? Hopefully he can work things out with Gaara now.
person FathomX
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I hope that things work out for them.