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Hey there!!!!! Absolutely loved the newest chapter! Starting with the funny bits. Man you had me LMAO when Naruto said-“I was totally not even scared for real ya know. I was just protecting you since you’re such a pansy.” I couldn't stop laughing, that was such a Naruto comment!!!!! Also chica, WHY DID YOU MAKE HAKU A DOUBLE FOR DEIDARA???? What did he need a stunt double for the upside down scene?lol Nah, I'm just pulling your leg. You did fantastic with the character developement concerning Neji; this is actually the first time that I definitely feel like Gaara/Neji can have the happily ever after ending all us loving yaoi girls dream about. ^_^ My only question concerning this is whether you're going to explain Neji's sudden realization that it really is Gaara he's ga ga about. I mean I just get the feeling that there should be a time when it's explained why he pushed Gaara away and was convinced he wanted to leave him. Do you get what I mean? I know that you explained with the whole pressure thing but it just seems like there was something else in the equation, like the fact that when Gaara loved him he felt like he was being smothered. Are these things going to be addressed in the heart to heart Neji wants to have with Gaara? OMG! What am I doing? I'm sorry for all the confusing questions, it's just like this chapter opened a can of worms (not in a bad way) and feels like it leads to something a lot more serious. Anyway just ignore my inquisitive/annoying side, that's too much tea and too little sleep kicking in. I thought this chapter was great and either my brain is too fried or I keep having blonde moments concerning this area in the story but this whole Mr.X thing has me for a loop. I think I should start watching the Naruto Shippuuden if I want to eliminate some possible candidates, I just don't know enough about Deidara and Sasori to peg their characters. I don't think it's them though, it seems to obvious, or maybe that's your intention, you know a slap in the face at the end XP .

I need to get around to reading the whole thing some time, it's very good. ^_^

I've only read the first four chapters of this story, but it's bedtime and I can't read any more tonight. So I'll go ahead and leave a review of what I've read so far. Great job! You have so many things going on here, I can't wait to see where they go...especially with Gaa/Sasu..always been a favorite crack couple of mine. And your chapters are so nice and LONG. It's great. I don't feel cheated when I click for the next chapter. I really like this! And I will read the rest tomorrow, I can't wait to catch up. Thanks for the story!

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OMG that was great!! YAY gaara and niji ^^
i love it so much, i read it i think last night but i didnt really
get it.....because i had a couple of drinks and so on, but now that i
understand it, its fucking awsome! *sighs happly* i truely enjoy reading

Well i must say your plot is amazing. Normally i can figure the plot but not on this story. I have no real advice or whatever right now, so i will end with the fact that i feel for Haku because i recently was put/are in his position. See you next chapter, Kat

That was a good chapter. I enjoyed trying to solve Orochimaru's poem. I actually go most of it, but I completely missed the first line. I didn't even think about tennis. I had some other idea going on in my head. I think a sidestory from Itachi's POV would be interesting since he hasn't had much time in the story. Then again, I like the idea of a sidestory from Mr. X's POV just because I want some answers. I can't wait until the next chapter.

GAH! How could you do that????? Leave the story in the middle of such an important scene???? KNOWing you, you'll most likely pick up the story from somewhere else and let us get drenched in the rain while waiting for a recap or something to let us know what the fuck happened!!!!! GRRRRRRRR! It'd better be Sasuke that Naruto was referring to!lol I have to tell you I'm honestly lost, in a good way I mean. First with the whole Mr.Y (you called him X so I'm calling him Y b/c XY make a man!hahahahahaha-this is me on way too much sugar) threatening poor Gaara, who the hell did Nauto think it was??? Also, in that fight scene I was on the edge of my seat, I mean half of me was saying this has to be fake, this has to be fake, then the other half was like, man he's beating the shit out of Naruto! This has to be real!lol So I was so releaved at the ending of the chappie where they were all good, though I would have killed Gaara if I'd been Naruto (he may just yet) for using what I'd spilled to him against me. Anyway, now you seriously have me rooting for Gaara/Haku, Neji's just too damn smug to get what he wants. I'd love it for them to get together and then dangle it in his face, but don't have Gaara use Haku just to do that, I think it's time Haku got some REAL love, no strings attached. I love his response to Neji though -'and tell him I said he’s selfish and a prick and his head is huge and that he’s a horrible lover. Tell him he’s no good in bed either. Oh, and that I hate and him and I hope his car 360’s off a cliff and I hope he’s in it and sinks to the bottom of Lake Konoha.'-LMAO! That's so something I can picture him saying. Well that's all for now, great job Ane (figured out what I'm calling you yet?). Can't wait for more, especially b/c I think I might fall off the edge of the cliffie!

Wow... I was so very confused untill the end. Ahh... but i loved it.
thanks. jenny@wauchula.net

Yakatta!! I'm so happy you updated. This chapter was soo good! I think you deserve a cookie *give cookie* enjoy! And please update soon!!!